That...was awful. Not the actual writing; but it's execution? Fuck me. When you establish something MAKE IT FUCKING CONSISTENT. i.e the god damn power levels. That and the fact that 80 percent of this is quite literally reiterating dialogue over and fucking over to NO actual point; I have to say this needs a rewrite. Again, premise is great, you have pretty good grammar skills; but the way you went about the actual storytelling? Dear god.

Another day in the life of Naruto niggerfaggot, the fucking idiot who talks so much you say "Heil Hitler, fucky me asshole long time ching chong".

to bad story was gave up on

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Great job

Pls make more this is amazing I love it!

What did i just read

oh god so edgy

story seemed kinda interesting. but narutos just another moody edgy OC.

Also.

"Forever Signed in Blood"?

nice one fag. nothing edgier you could go for?
bet youre the type of fuck who cuts themselves while listening to papa roach.

why the fuck does this naruto talk so much? he's a raving retard with serious mental issues. Does this make him seem badass to you, because if it does you have mental issues aswell. Also why the fuck does he tell his secrets to everyone during the preliminaries, 'thats the angel of death, she shouldn't have it because i have the other one' what a fuckwit, well your the writer so i guess your the fuckwit.
PS, who the fuck names a sword the angel of death

really great story shame it ended here would have liked to see it finished

I liked the chapter!

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I love the evilness ahahhahahahaaaaa

gotta say like naruto's character and the way there interacting so 9/10 at character interactions story is getting more up my alley but i think it would have been better to start from the tragic childhood and not done flashbacks that way you have more connection while reading but still good

not bad a 8/10 for your writing style and a 5/10 for story so far