This is one of the best stories on the site!

Cool!

Lov.

This story was very nice.

As something of a yuri lemon expert (or so I've been called before), I can say this was a great start, even if it was sort of random, hectic and impractical. I've always felt that smut doesn't have to make sense in the first place, personally, so I won't complain.

But yeah, that was pretty hot despite being a little too short. I kind of wished going into it that the bondage them would have lasted a little longer, but I understand the decision to change to more traditional yuri scene.

hot, but kinda fast-paced/random. nice work fo such a short fic though.