I love your Point of Views! I really think you have your way with words. Especially with journal writing... Well Done TDH!

Excellently written and absorbing TDH! Where is the second part?

Very interesting! Such a cute chapter. And the twist was nice too! :) Great job!

Brilliant.

Wow! That's all I can say is Wow! I absolutely love this! The level of detail is amazing. And I absolutely love how- while in the rain- you have Marik reminiscing over Filiron. It's sweet. I really enjoyed this. How their meeting entirely coincidental! "A waiter?" Well, I suppose we fall in love in places unexpected. Very sweet! One of my favorite stories thus far!

-NuitSongeur

this story is nice :D

i liked the way it started

and Marik and Sheon's father meet

like to see where this is going :D

update soon :D

I find a touch of romance and intreg to meet someone you feel a connection with. Its as comfort thats what I get from this. They could become great friends, yet I wonder is there a secret mystery in your mind why they haven't met.

Yay for repented Marik! Repented Marik is definitely a lot more likable.

Ooh, I like the ambiance of the Irish café, Very nice imagery.

Great chapter.

Haha. Irishness FTW!

Yup. I think Marik was in character.

Please update soon!

Good chapter, I liked it.