Like always, loved this story a lot. Made me smile, made me cry. I always believed and still do that Temari should have been his wife

Absolutely beautiful! Loved every second reading it.

Fuck you asshole. Your side pairings suck about as much dick as your limp father does.

This was an amazing one shot. Absolutely gorgeous work. I almost cried it was so pretty and well written

dont know if you are still active but this needs a full story

This was a good story frick u Sakura

That was beautiful. I am literally crying right now at how you ended this story, well done!

Hey, that's pretty good. I usually favorite stories so I ca read them later but this is going on because it's just that good.

wow loved this story

This was adorable! I-I'd love for this to be fleshed out.

preety fuckin solid ending

firstly great story and second. to the people saying that 12 and 14 children are way tp many take a moment to realize that 1) naruto and temari and immortal so those 12 kids could habe very well been spreas over 20 years while konohamaru had 2 wives. 7 children isnt that many at all. and 2) my dad is 1 of 13 and my mom is 1 of 16 so it really ist that many in reality

this was amazing. and the people who think there is to many children, theyre ninja they have high stamina and a high death rate so i think they had a good amount

You've done so many stories I loved :) Even without the lemon it it this would be one of my favourite stories on the site tbh, it's so goooood :) and the two epilogues were good!

Nigga what is wrong with you? 12, 14 children? U high?