It's so well-written, beautiful and sweet. Please continue.

Now this here. This is not just awesome and fantastic but also new and fascinating. I am love. ️️️

Wow, the premise is so fun! If you ever decide to write the rest you would have a ton of happy readers!

You know, im a little confused on why this is rated M

Geez woman! You can't leave it there! I don't care if it was years and years ago and you don't like what you'd pre written, please just post up your other chapters so your loving readers can see a bit more of your ideas for this fic. I love it! Such a brilliant idea and so well handled. You really brought the reader and Lily round in this chapter! I would love to see more. Even snippets. Or if you ever have the chance to write more please do! Your writing is so real and present, full of feeling. This was my favourite chapter so far xxx

Hey lovely writer you! This was so good, it felt so strong, so real when they were talking and the subtext was incredible, all the little thoughts and realisations.

Ah this was so good, so mcuch going on and again a fantastic mix of thoughts and action.

Loved this chapter, how could I not with a discussion of one of my favourite books :).
I'm a little sad that it is set so close to the end of hogwarts. I know that gives it some of the urgency and makes the war and fighting so much realer and closer but I so enjoy hogwarts times and makes me feel sad that they didn't get it together a little earlier! Lol. But you're making it a fabulous story so it's not really important!

Ooh this was such a good contrast to the first chapter. You can do everything well it seemed. Loved the sexy tension and then having James' thoughts and it not just be a random daydream but structured as he cleaned the trophies.

I never read this?! Ah how come?! It starts with a fantastic fight! So excited for the next chapter! And glad you decided to finish the fic

I really enjoyed this chapter (and the whole story!) but I would LOVE to see you write a few more chapters :D!

I seriously think you have the potential to do a whole lot more with your writing abilities. Please DON'T hesitate to write more

A faithful fan

Oh my goodness! I just found this and love it so much. You've definitely given up, but thank you so much for what you did write.

oh, i'm disappointed
the romance is going way too fast, and james had been after lily for ages so nothing is making sense

oh my god i am so happy, i'm telling you
i've been looking for a decent written jily fic for AGES
i feel like tlat is the only good thing out there (except for a few nice one-shots here and there)
i mean, i've only read the first chapter, but i think i might actually like your story which has to mean something because i am so picky it's unbelievable
on to chapter 2! :D

This cliffhanger made me feel like my heart has been ripped out and stomped on it. You know EXACTLY how to tug on the heartstrings of readers! You are so talented and must keep writing this story! It's so lovely!