Poor Holly, hope she gets her revenge!
Loved the family bonding
Update soon please

Poor Holly!

oh, security dave is just amazing!

Awww poor Holly, I hope paul comes to his senses.

I didn't read this before, but was just reading the the 30 part one whos name I forget! it was amazing, im sorry I didn't review, but I could't get it to work! and then I saw this one. so I will read it...!
p.s. I do hope your aimee doesn't turn out like the aimee in the story! x

this was so good love this story really glad you updated xxxx

Great!

Love!

This was fantastic loved the Rachel/Holly bits xxxxxxx

maybe Holly could start behaving really badly to get attention xxxxx

i really like this fic, i think that you should maybe have Holly become jealous of her mum spending so much time with Phil, Eddie and Aimee and start getting worse because in her head the only time she gets attention is if she behaves badly.

Just read all of this and I love it, so you could have Holly confront Michela and Paul and her revenge could her and Bolton sleep together just a suggestion

I have two ideas (just re read it... Love this story)

1) holly could become jealous of how close Rachel and Aimee are (school reports etc) so become more rebellious

2)scorned by Paul, holly may (again) become more rebellious and start sleeping with anyone and could lead to being paid for it like her mum?

Don't know if they're any good ... Just ideas :) glad you're updating x

love the story can't wait to see whats next! :)

please update new romances soon, i really miss the repetative new chapters, i really like this story.x