That was cute. And sad. And happy all at the same time.

Keep up the good work!

~Angel

This story was funny and fluffy yet sad and awwwwwww at the same time. I can't decide whether I like the conclusion or not, but it was a cute story.

maybe you should up the rating a little? :D

anyway it was really well written and it deserves way more review!

good work and I liked it :)

awwwww it WAS a sad ending! sniff sniff (T_T)

poor kakashi although he knew it couldn't be reciprocate but still...i thought that Minato would love him the same way eventually.

love the story ! (u) and the idea it was awesome...

but i always feel sad when Kakashi doesn't get what he wants

amazing story, cannot wait for the next chapter!

oh my god! fuck its amazing this story is awesome please please! finish it ! im begging you jaja owww poor kakashi how i hate see him sad and rejected, just don't make him too needy because he is strong and he could handle it ,make minato now be the one persuading after him...

i'll die for you if you want me to, but please continue asap. i'm dying...

This chapter was still amusing as I imagined Minato's appearance as he ran through Konoha.

At the end the scene kept on reminding me of the couple Miyagi/Shinobu from Junjou Romantica

Please update soon!

please make another chapter.

This was a great chapter, it just has so many wonderful things in it. You did a good job with the interaction between Kakashi and Yondaime, I can't wait to see more. I loved the part with Jiraiya and his stranglehold on the Yondaime, I could just picture his expression. I look forward to the next part, thanks for sharing!

I really like this story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I love this chapter! I really do! XD So I'm giving a light hearted review seeing as this is your first fanfic and all.

So Kakashi changed his appearance all for a striptease club...? *ponders this thoughtfully as Kakashi tries to sneak away, before grabbing him by the collar*

You're a pervert Kakashi!

Sarutobi is also a little bit of a pervert for letting a striptease club in Konoha.

Ah so if Minato was blushing then it means that Jiraiya must have dragged his unwilling student along.

Ah Minato and everyone else can't help but stare at Kakashi huh, you can't really blame them, Kakashi is handsome. Ah, I was very amused when Minato admitted that he was hitting on Kakashi.

His babbling, nervousness and blushes are really cute displays of behavior if you ask me.

So if Kakashi is fifteen how old is Minato, and is Naruto born or even exist now since he was born when Kakashi was fourteen?

Ah but this chapter really is like a Cinderella story. Please update soon!

This story is amazing! Please tell me you'll write more, it really made my day, and I really love this pairing, if only there were more of it, now all I have to do is re-read it 10 times and my life will be perfect!

ARe you going to continue this story?