Wow! that was really nice :) write more!

The ending was very sweet and kind of spiritual, good job expounding on something that was wrapped up very quickly in the book (and even quicker in the movie, what were those writers thinking?).

sabes nisiquiera lei tu asquerosa historia

yo solo pienso en susan &caspian

AH! YOU TOTALLY GET LOVE! That is why I love LOTR, because Aragorn didn't love Arwen because of how she looked he loved HER, her soul, her being. I cannot stand what has become the veiws of love today. (I also saw that you like the Dark Is Rising series *cheers loudly* I haven't found any other person besides myself who have read it.)

Wow! Dearheart, that was absolutely beautiful. :') Awesome job describing Caspian's feelings. There definitely needs to be more romance fiction like *this* out there!

I liked your explanation why Caspian fell in love with Ramandu's daughter.

Too many authors follow movieverse and write the stories with Suspian pairing.

I need you to edit my next book! You (whoever you are) did an excellent job describing Caspian's feelings. Please write more!

That was very good... very well written and lovely :)

Beautiful. Thank you for writing this.

Beautiful. Absolutely stunning.

This is absolutely beautiful! Fantastic work!

Dear "Dearheart",

:D This is a lovely fanfiction! Wonderful job!

It's definitely going on my fave list. ;)

In Christ,

Kaylee M

This is wonderful, it makes you feel happy. Or at least, it made ME feel happy now.:) It is wonderful that Caspian didn't fall in love with her merely because of her beauty, I think this makes the story as popular as it is, obviously not everybody is as shallow as most people perceive 'modern' people to be.:) I don't know if I make sense, it's almost three in the morning here and I am unable to sleep despite my tiredness, so I'm distracting myself with reading and reviewing. I hoped this would be a series of chapters explaining this girl's and Caspian's relationship, but this was a pleasant surprise. x x x

It may be short, but it's beautifully written.

You've shown your readers a wonderful glimpse of the love between Caspian and The Star's Daughter, and the strength this young king possessed to look beyond outward appearances to the true worth of this woman's soul.

Excellent work.

Oh, this was stunning! Your take of why and how Caspian fell in love so fast was perfect. You wrote her so well.