I loved this story! And I can’t believe the same person wrote the hating game!

I am living for the last AN

I’ve already reviewed your story, but I feel like it needs to be said again. What a jewel this is. What a jewel YOU are. I have reread this story countless times, and yet every time feels like the first. The emotions you’ve created with your characters are remarkable, and the depth of them is breathtaking. Every heart-wrenching realization, and all the little sweet things you sprinkled on top and underneath them, make me ache. But nothing more so than the story coming to an end. I don’t know when or if you’ll see this review...but know that your characters and the lovely ache they bring will chase me into my dreams tonight.

great chapter. i really think Edward deserved to know the consequences of his behavior.

God! He really is a hot asshole, isn't he?

Wow

Noice

Is this darkward? And edward and alice?

I just feel like reading this story again. it's so soooo good and will always be on my favourites list! I just love everything single thing about the story, the imagery and the way you've left some things unsaid. I just loved it, so so much!

I'd say this chapter somewhat made up for last chapter. Even tho I hate it when Authors pull the couple gets together in very last chapter.. Especially in stories like there when the main pair share a special connection, don't you think your readers would love to them in untroubled relationship and how they are without tension?

I still am mad you had Bella say she loved Mike, but looking at it now... Bella was trying to save Mike's ego and not be cruel, she doesn't have it in her. STILL FIND IT OOC. Doesn't seem like something she would say, and going off her dialogue this chapter, she does not love dude. OOC moment for sure.

I loved the dynamic between Bella and Edward..

She loves him? Since when? Honestly, this is what I mean when I talk aboutthis Bella.. IT'S also OOC for you to have Bella say she loves Mikes, she doesn't. If she did, she would have used it as a defense against Edward when he was first coming onto her when she got back.

Then to have Edward walk by and hear it? That's last minute drama and it's completely just ruin the fic and vibe.

While Edward is definitely quiet the enigma, and was a ass when they were young.. Older Bella is indecisive and weak and truly doesn't know what she wants or needs, it needs to spelled out for her.

In other words, if this was BDSM, she would be a natural sub.

Mike is not a good man, he is obviously controlling . While Edward is beyond possessive, at least he would let her be her. Mike literally pursued her as a game in the first place, and happened to 'fall' for her. In reality he was just happy he got her to him a chance and now he is mad his prize is being taken.

Honestly... Mike didn't win that exchange.. Bella helped him.

If mike gets hurt, it's bella fault.

I’m in floods of tears, once again.
I’ve revisited this story many times over the years,
It will never grow old,
Such a heartbreaking-warm-beautiful-careing story.
You take your time, giving Carlisle his own chapters that are so bitter sweet and beautiful.
This time reading this story though something had changed in my life, my mother had been diagnosed with cancer and while she’s okay now, this story just hit so much more this time.
The beauty you give her, the grace and her strength just hit beyond this time.
Thank you so much for this,
I hope you are doing well xox