I will commend you on coming back to finish the story. It's not easy getting back into finishing a past project, and especially since so many SSX fanfics are left open ended, it's really nice seeing a longer story completed.

Soooo is it bad that in the month I've known you I didn't know u ha more than one story

So you invented Allana's trick at last! Lol great updates. Sorry I havent been on lately-I have been so busy! Anyway, as usual, great job, and im sure there will be another one coming soon...right? lol of course there will.

Omg I cannot beleive they aren't getting along. e.e So much drama! I bet they secretly enjoy it, Allegra and Allana and Skye. That's why Skye and Allana like each other so much, haha.

This is a nice story so far. Allana is a cool character. Is Skye the same Skye in On Tour?

omg. Great chapters! That really made things intense-keep the updates coming!

Lol i love how Viggo got kind of sad when Allegra said "maybe there'll be cute boys there!" Great chapter as usual. Keep it up. I'm awaiting that "tragic event" you just told me about.

ok that was just cruel. Lol im dying to know what Allana did! Update soon please! Youre doing a great job!

woah, so allana is lady who fancies a lady and they "fancied" each other up but allegra doesn't know...good

its good so far, it caught my attention, and when i say this next part keep in mind i haven't finished reading yet, but i really want to see more Zoe X Psymon, I haven't found a good story on this site with those two

Wow now im really curious. What did Allana DO? And r u bringing Skye into this later? Keep it up-although im sure i dont have to tell u that, since ur already writing at like a million miles an hour. lol

Aw *tear* lol it would have been really funny if Psymon would have cried or something. Or even Zoe. That would have cracked me up.

More SSX madness is coming, you say? Lol muaha I LOVE madness. Those stories are always my favorite. Keep em comin'!

Once again, nice job :D Can't wait to see another update. I almost like Allana better than Allegra in this story actually. I mean if I had brains like her and got the opportunity she did I would have ran away too...Allegra needs to forgive her and get over it. Anyway, great story so far. Hopefully you'll get another update in soon.

Yeah its a weird habit I have. Overall im proud of my work. Lolz.

Hey, what up? I just saw this today. You finally posted your story that you've been talking about for so long! Yay! I like what you've got so far, and I don't mind at all that you rushed into things. Like I said, I love Allana (my favorite SSX OC of all time) and I think the whole family fight between her and Allegra is really creative. Update as soon as you can-I can't wait to see what happens next! :D

P.S The only thing is that sometimes you run the dialogue together in one paragraph, and it makes it kind of confusing. Other than that, excellent job!