Great job shame you stopped

You can feel the maturation of Naruto's natural intensity here well. I can see he's really grown up.

I'm also curious as to how you're going to handle the on-going Hyuuga issue; I haven't forgotten that.

Looking forward to more, though of course, I want to see them succeed quickly!

This story and Trial by Leaves have been my favorites by far until now, but I'll go ahead and keep reading this story. I refuse to believe you're evil enough to kill off Hinata...

Glad to see you're back and doing better! And I'm happy to hear you have more ideas for where this story is headed. I'm not sure where they're going to head after Waterfall, but I don't imagine this is where everything gets resolved.

This chapter has me curious how Shibuki will interact with the Sand siblings. It looks like he'll probably be overly cautious and curt with them, and I can't imagine Temari allowng her brother to be slighted in any way. Do we have angry sibling defending to look forward to?

Dang, I freaking FELT Naruto's inner torment about his kids! I'm actually tearing up a little bit!

Keep up the good work, friend!

I want more rightr now

NOOOOOOOOOOO! I WAS SO EXITED! DX
damn, anyway, I hope you feel better soon. my reaction can only show how much I love this story.

Dang, sorry to hear you were having such a bad time...Good chapter, though, nonetheless!

Keep up the good work!

But that's the thing about cloak-and-dagger stuff; it never ends (just look at our own government). XD So don't worry about it and continue on the path you've chosen.

Wow, sounds like you've had a crazy year. I'm glad to hear things have brightened up a bit with your financial situation, and hopefully your mother starts feeling better. Real life always comes first, and I wish you the best in yours.

In regards to this chapter, it's nice to see we finally have a lead on the kidnappers, even if it's just that one of them is wearing a Waterfall headband (which doesn't necessarily mean they're from Waterfall). It's also interesting that Sand children have been kidnapped as well. Will we see other villages drawn into this mystery?

it's already 2014! when will you update?! I love this story and couldn't wait for you to update. so please, at least finish it?

man fuck you your killin off hinata...

I really like your story. I think you should continue. I would be very happy to have more chapters. I wait very Impatiently for the next one. You're doing quite well considering your situations. You can count me among your avid reader. Fanime-club!

good story and all with great character development. Just wish for more chapters with zumi plz. (She's so cute 3)

Huh... Where do i start...
I would like to say thank you for everything. For writing, for updating, for existing! It is thanks to you that i was introduced to fanfiction and your stories have got me addicted to naruhina. I DIDNT EVEN KNOW THAT WAS A THING BEFORE now it has been 11 months since i first got the link to on a forum and your story was the first one i saw... I feel really happy because i forgot about you and i was just stumbled upon your story by accident. You have greatly, for better or for worse affected my life in such a huge way and i dont know what the last year of my life would have been without your story and for that i just would like to say thank you... Bye