Awww too bad this is one-shots,i would love to see the “after” stuff hehe btw nice one-shots,i loved it!

I thought she's gonna says naruto use kagebunshin...

Oh god, I can’t take it! Whywhywhyyoudothis

I love this so much! I started laughing so hard and almost hit my head on the wall lol

I almost cry! This is so well writen, all of it but this chapter really got to me. I'm definitely follow in you as an autor and adding this story to my favorites!

I really love this couple ! I've never seen another pairing quite like that, and they compliment each other so well :D. Beside SasuNaru, this pairing is my favorite, and the only thing the canon did right ..

Hi! This fic is REALLY good, but the plot twist just left me asking: "Why, Temari, WHY?" I think it was an interesting plot twist, and the jokes made me laugh so hard! If I were to choose my favourite chapter, it would have to be chapter 11.
Keep making more fics!

Noooooooooooooo. NoneofthisisokaywhydidyouDOthistome!? Way to break my heart into a million pieces. Never okay! But the writing was great. :)

Each of these chapters were so well written! The emotions are really reaching to me Q v Q

More cuteness indeed. The carefully chosen vocabulary definitely reflects this is truly Shikamaru and Temari!

Nice capture on what his Jutsu could do to her. I rather enjoy the short but sweet stories!

That cut deep. But not as keep as her knife!

This chapter… Wow, it was so poignantly beautiful, and I think my heart honestly broke when she said she deserved to see him. Although it was not the most happiest chapter, it was the most impactful for me, and I just want to say "Keep taking those magical showers, girl!" Kudos to you and your amazing work!

Cunning beats IQ only half the time, but what an awesome half it is.

this was a little angsty... i like it *thumbs up*