you made chloe sound like a baby

jjs making me mad hes stealing chloe from derek and simon

My heart breaking in two the story one of the best i ever knew please dont break my heart and continue without the story im lost i have never seen a person who could grasp the pain of a broken heart with such bitter sweet words please dont stop and make me cry for the one story i longed in life oh please oh please continie what i've seen and only started to know my feelings at the end continue to grow i beg you for the happy maybe bitter sweet ending you shall create for this story and so i plead to you dont let my hrart break in two as its already breaking as i can dana's pain in my heart as it broke a little today please continue please dont end it all and please know you have inspired my next story i may never post it or publish it but if i do i have you to thank so thank you so very much my happy for the story and sad for the end of such poetry please know ithat i see its not the final chapter or so i hope i will wait for ther next chapters with all the rest who cant find the words to say what i have please continue for this story's biggest fan and i shall wait again.

NOOOOOOOO
I cried, I cried for about 5 minutes straight when I was reading this...*sniff sniff*

Yep he discovered rope alright

NO J.J NO! SHE NEEDS YOU PLEASE WRITE MORE!

that was the saddest ending I've heard. it made me cry. why would you make an ending like that. I thought this was supposed to be humor. but turns out it is tragedy. I feel sad now.

You can't let J.J. die! You have to write the next chapter, this is just unfair! Omg if J.J. dies I'm going to cry!

why didt you stop? you can just stop like that

I just re-read this entire thing... Gosh it was soooooo much funnier than I remembered! And those little moments! Gosh, those take me back!

Omigosh... and I have nothing left to say.

Yes, because tori might be able to hack into computers and blackmail a couple of adults, but she still isn't too bright

Awesome. Write more.

Ahh! You can't leave it here! 41 chapters and a deathly cliffhanger?! Please!
On a calmer note, though, you wrote a fantastic death scene! All I can't think of is Chloe's purple hair through most of this though. Especially since I'm a 5'2, 110 pound girl with previously purple hair just dyed red.

awwwwwwww thats so cute!
this is really good and one of the best chloe/derek ff i have read :D