Also if Kagome did mate with Sesshomaru and Inupapa...then she would basically be rutting with her dad and brother...which is gross. Ive seen lota of bad fanfiction, one was that kagome was raped by sesshomaru and she just accepted it. Another was the summary...there are so many summaries that have 'nd' in it and shorten words. But I honestly enjoyed this! xD It is truly amazing!

oh wait this is complete my bad:(

Hey I love this story: could u maybe do one on how kagome fights with inuyasha and then runs away and meets sesshomaru and falls in love with him?

HILARE!

I personally find it annoying when shippo and rin call her mama

this is hilarious so far! awesome job

what about misrepresenting characters like Kagome being a klutz when at worst she's just less graceful than than sango miroku and inuyasha who either have training or have had many years to perfect it or how they make Kagome bad at cooking when she really isn't and stuff like that.

I also wonder about those who refer to Rin's height at the age of 9-12 reaching between Sesshoumaru's knee and waist. Really? How tall is he anyway?

So True

I LOVE this! And I also hate it.

I love it because it's SOOOOOOOOO true. I cannot even begin to count how many bad fanfiction I've read where these "techniques" are used because High School writers know no difference.

To be fair, I succumb to a few every so often, and I get request for demonized Kagome stories, so I can't completely bomb all of these.

I hate it because it makes me remember every bad story I've ever had to read this for and hold myself back from pointless ranting because it wasn't worth it.

The horror! The horror!

Thanks for this. :)
Hana

Ha, you know what annoys me even more? It's when authors think that they have to put everything in capital letters for emphasis or when the characters yell. All the time...

Thanks for writing this. It's a highly entertaining read and I loved learning all the different things people do. My favorite was the misspelled words! :)

This kind of stories are the worst. English is not my native language, so this story for me is really almost impossible to understand.

Haha, awesome! I love this!

By the way, do you think you could possibly mention the difference between "unconscious" (asleep, K.O., comatose, etc..) and "subconscious" (doing aomething without really noticing, having a thought way in the back of your head, etc.)? you don't even have to write a chapter about it, just mention it. It is an admittedly large pet peeve of mine

Oh Kami! I nearly DIED when Sesshomaru started shouting...ahh; funny :D