I'm totally stuck on this. The writing is beautiful. :)

One word: Amazing.
Your writing is beauty.

it's rare that I review a fic. I favorite them all the time, but, despite how much time is wasted with nonsensical words spoken, I tend to refuse to waste my time (and the writer's, really) on something that can be implied with a quick click, as there's nothing else that needs saying.

As such, when someone creates a piece that encourages me to leave a note on their works, it does require some semblance of congradulations.

I really enjoy the more... surreal styles of writing, as they have a tendancy to echo my own thoughts. This is quite well-written, addressing things that a surprising number of writers generally ignore. I hope you'll update soon.

This Is A Really Good Story, I Can't Think Of What Else To Say!

this is oh so beautifully written. my god i'm weak at the knees. i don't usually read fanfiction about pein or konan, but i think you might have converted me forever.

this is without doubt one of the best fics i've read. So much that i went back and read all your other fics. REALLY great stuff, the way you write Pain/Nagato and Konan is literally the way i view them, and is as close to their canon characters as i've ever seen.

Your also probably the only one i've ever seen actually address the issue of the main Pain body being Yahiko's corpse and all the psychological issues that would go into that when doing anything romantic/sexual between Pain and Konan. Very impressed you had the guts to go there, though after looking at your other stories i guess i shouldn't be surprised, lol.

Again, really great story. Noticed it hasn't been updated in quite some time though, I REALLY hope your able to continue this.

amazing descriptions. This fic really brings out the tragedy of the warring nations that most people are ignorant of when reading anything Naruto related. The surreal sensations, hazed recallations, and poignant realizations that Konan experiences make them all the more believable.

I like the different stages you have and the places you decide to gloss over as opposed to paraphrasing the manga. LOVE the overall mood and tone you carry throughout the piece. This definitely fits in to explain the history of the three, and is very well written compared to most other pein/konan fics :]

Really wish you'd continue this!

I already favourited this story, but I don't think I've ever actually commented on it.

This is... amazing in every aspect. I love this fic so entirely, hope you update soon. I am very eager to read the next chapter.

nice ;D

I finally had a chance to catch up on this, and it's amazing and so tragic. I really feel immersed in what poor Konan is going through; you've really conveyed the jumbled mix of emotions she's feeling so well.

The smut, of course, was also excellent. ;)

Awesome work!

Gobbling this up. 3 Will leave real reviews on LJ when it is done.

Jesus christ, the tragedy of this all. Your writing is so poignant here. I am actually shocked you write like this for a fandom audience. Usually this kind of writing is reserved for original work. This is fantastic.

Will be leaving a -real- review when this is finished. Just wanted to let you know that I'm up at 7am, on no sleep, reading this. Love it.

Another great chapter!

I find Regina Spektor and the Muse very good writing/drawing music as well . Therea just like some magical creative juice in there or something

Konan is the character I see myself the most as, not only as a woman, but also as a broken person. I luv this.

please update soon !