Reviews for Obvious |
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Oninja chapter 1 . 5/27/2015 screams because i only found out i shipped this five minutes ago, this is perfect thank you |
Sassygurl123 chapter 1 . 12/30/2013 This has to be my favourite 2nd generation fanfic! I love it so much! |
ProbablyRiley chapter 1 . 5/15/2013 this was an awesome story, and come on we all know Lily has her mothers talent with bets. hah |
daisyatomic chapter 1 . 12/4/2011 So cute! |
xNomii chapter 1 . 7/4/2011 Oh, I loved it! For some reason, I always find stories on your profile I've never read before, even though I already checked it out like 700 times! |
LauraTimes chapter 1 . 4/25/2011 Best J.S.P & S.M story I have ever read. Wish you would write more :) |
gote chapter 1 . 4/11/2011 Ahh, I love this! Even if it got a touch too cheesy for my tastes in parts, but I was still squealing all the way through. I loved the description of James and Al's reaction best. Well done on this, it's really funny, sweet and well written. :) |
lovely2006 chapter 1 . 1/3/2011 It was. Sweet. Fullstop. |
superninjagurl chapter 1 . 12/11/2010 This is incredibly well done. This is everything I look for in a James II/Scorpius-fic - you've looked past the usual "Oh no, you're in Slytherin, I'm in Gryffindor, what should we do with our angsty love?" thingy and gone in another, far more interesting direction. My favourite part is when you described James in all his casual half-naked glory - so comfortable in himself and that is exactly what makes him so attractive and desirable. Just those small details, like his stubble and the freckles upon his skin, makes me see this scene before me, as if I am Scorpius, watching him in badly concealed awe. In conclusion; I love this fic. /Becka |
SuperCali chapter 1 . 11/29/2010 Mmm! |
lynxzpanther chapter 1 . 10/17/2010 aww, that's actually adorable! this pairing scares the crud-monkeys out of me because I'm addicted to Al/Scorpius stories, so pairing Scorpius with Albus' older brother just kinda weirds me out a lot, but this one was amazing! |
The Shonen-Ai and Yaoi Goddess chapter 1 . 6/4/2010 I would be too, Score. I would be, too. |
youcantcatchmeimdead chapter 1 . 3/24/2010 SQUEE! That was amazing! You rock! |
mjmusiclover chapter 1 . 10/27/2009 aww this is very sweet, i love it, this rocks |
MopCat chapter 1 . 10/3/2009 *dies* I think you may of killed me with fluff overload. |