I love the story I hope you Continue again one day!

you should read again this story, and think about what we wouuld like it to become! it'snice like that, but you need to expect something from you r onework... i'm not sure that I hlp, but hope you will be able to finish you story! good luck

Please continue this!

Yes please! It's quite a cute story! So even if a year or 2 has passed, I hope you still have inspiration and passion for this story..

Great story xD

Would have loved to know how it continued

Damn I want more please update soon

Uwah is so beautiful! TT_TT

The story is good so far so keep writing your really talented chap 2 was realy good too but don't let sasuke off to easy and also have naruto strugle more.

this story is awesome!..for your first story its very good to tell you the truth!..i hope when i post my story people will like it!..hehe i hope you keep writing!...XD

I LOVE IT!

a little confusing at first, but i still like it anyway.

whoa

how the hell do u pronounce ur name? like yaoi or something else cuz when i read it it sounds like this- yay o e

you say o and e like they are different sentences.

Good chapter. I was surprised that Naruto is staying with Sasuke even after what he did to Maya. It looks like Sasuke will be having competition with Itachi for Naruto's love. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please, update soon.

not 2 bad i like it:)

*~ashley~*

...Lots of grammer mistakes.

Poor Maya. *sniff*