I love this story. Really enjoyed how you wrote about nejiten relationship

haha classy tenten haha real classy;)

Naruto was the really OOC but not bad for a first attempt at the parering

This was a really great one-shot, and I loved it!

aw i love it! i can't believe neji is such a cutie! lol yeah this was cute really cute!

this is really good. there's no way u can make this a one shot. it's great no matter what anybody says. if they do say bad things there just jelous cuz they can't write as good as u. : ) keep up the good work

love it so much especially when neji's being a hero to tenten...

"so much for the romantic moment "...hehehehe

Aw! 3 How super ultra mega AWESOME! and CUTE! and GREAT!... I'm gonna stop here, but I only want you to know how much I LOVE, not like, L-O-V-E! Personaly I'd like to see a chapter 2, but that's up to you!

I would leave it as a one-shot.

It ended like a one-shot. ;)

You were right. Neji was OoC. Hehe. But it's fun sometimes to read him like that, emotional and all.

Aw. I wanted more shouting. :( ;)

*sigh*

I'm suffering from some insomnia right now. That's why you're receiving this so late.

Well, what else. . .

The way you write your words is very, very good. I only found a few grammar mistakes, but I always say those can be fixed easily. Your words were very descriptive (YAY!). :D

Well, dear, good job.

:D

- KNO

I love it as a one-shot and would love it if you continued, so it's completely up to you for me, if your up for writing it, I'm up for reading it, hee hee anyways awesome job! P

I love this story!

Great story .It shows Neji's caring cute make it a multi-chapter story.

Aw...

This was cute!

I'm such a fan for Neji losing his cool when it comes to Tenten! lol. Well, you did a great job on this. I liked the way you described everything instead of just saying it was just There.

I hope you make more stories!