| Reviews for Until death due us part |
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  brittni chapter 4 . 8/7/2016 More please |
 ToshiroHitsugayagirlfriend chapter 4 . 4/3/2010 LOve it a lot! |
| Luxord's Xigbar chapter 4 . 1/10/2010 AH YOU MUST UPDATE! i must read more |
| MistoffelessTrekyManiac chapter 4 . 12/15/2009 oh coolness |
| Princess-Lazy-Chan chapter 4 . 12/5/2009 awesome i like it cant wait for more lazy-chan |
| Hemeophage chapter 4 . 7/3/2009 Please write more soon! very good chapter. |
| Saskue's-Killer112 chapter 4 . 6/17/2009 this srory is so good please write more ib just go$ta read more.(;_; Please) |
| Kaijung chapter 4 . 6/10/2009 This is awesome! Keep updating! I can't wait for chapter 5! XP |
| BrokenForgotenButStillHere chapter 4 . 6/8/2009 Hey the titles for the chapters are nice and all but why is there the same first chapter for all of them? The story and Idea are very good but if you need help to get your story out there please dont hesitate to ask me. Hehehe also I say basically the help wanted sign for a beta reader. I have an acount on here and quizilla. I just have not added anything here because the program I have is not one recognised by fanfiction. My quizilla account is Shrab. I only have the first 5 chapters of my Garra Story posted. I have other stories I am longing to post but I hate typing allot. :P Anywho, let me know what you need and I can help ya alright _ ~Ayame |
| S.U. Flamer chapter 1 . 6/8/2009 You're right. This stinks. Bad spelling, bad grammar and cliched plot. Why the hell didn't you spellcheck this? Actually, the better question is, why did you put this up? The plot is overly used, cliched, and generally bad in every sense of the word. The spelling and grammar, sucks, big time. "Bear" is not spelt "Bare". Also, just by looking at your OC, I can tell that it is most probably going to turn out as a mary-sue. Burn it alive. That thing is not going to missed. |
