Hi,
I just wanted to tell you I always come back to this fic every few months. I love this series. It’s amazing, well thought out and the angst and feelings just grab my heart and squeeze. I found this fanfic when I was between 12-14 on FanFiction Two weeks ago I just turned 21 years old. Last month I finally decided on my college major and got accepted into the degree program. I’m going to study public health. This fanfic was written when I was going through a really bad time. I was super depressed, anxious, and really didn’t see the light at the end of the tunnel. What kept my hopes up was this fanfic. I couldn’t wait for the updates and I looked forward to the day you updated. This fanfic really means so much to me. I always end up re-reading it a bunch of times. I don’t really have time anymore since college is taking most of my time. But when I’m not studying, writing papers, reading articles, or doing homework, this fanfic is always in the back of my mind or I’m re-reading it. This is my first multi-chapter fanfic series I fell in love with. This is what got me into FanFiction and ever since then I have been a dedicated fanfiction reader. This fanfic will always have a special place in my heart. Even if you don’t update, I really truly hope you do, this fanfic will always have a special place in my heart. It will always be a part of my top 10 fanfic series. I hope you have been ok these part few years. I know how it is when you fall out of love from a fandom. If you fell out of love from the Yugioh fandom, I’m sorry. If the people reading this fanfic were mean, critical and/or an absolute dick then I’m sorry. You didn’t deserve that and I hope you find the pasión and will to continue this fanfic. And if you don’t then I hope you continue with the same intensity, thrill and joy as you did with this fic and this fandom to other fandoms. I wanted to say thank you for adding this master piece to the Yugioh fandom. Thank you for your hard work and dedication you put into this fanfic. Your love and dedication is seen through your work

This was a fun ride. Thanks for taking us along for it

I like that you made Joey something slightly different. His defined role suits him very well, though I'd love to see the look on his face when he finds out about the future threesome.

Just wanted to say, I love everything about this story. It is fan-frigging-tastic

Nice story. I enjoyed reading it.

this is simple awesome, i really enjoy this!

love the story made me laugh and giggle with all the sex and the jokes being made that just...IDK Laugh
Keep on the writes

Actually, Heba is game and akhu is light.

nice

A very nice story. While I am not exactly a big fan of male pregnancy, it was so sublte for now that I could overlook it. The story itself was a great idea, though with some clichee here and there of course. One would be that it seems nearly everyone in YGO tends to end up gay. I guess I am rather thankful that you allowed at least one hetero pairing to be in there, even though it's a unusual one.

And what an evil cliffhanger to introduce the sequel. I am looking forward to read that one as well. Oh there is just one thing I need to really, really point out: You use of 'koi' is very wrong and as it sadly is very used in the fandom of fanfictions, I cringe every time I read it in one fanfic. Please note that 'koi' means for one the well known koi-fish and on the other hand it the noun "love" yes. But you use it for things like for example the exclamation: "It's love." - "Kore ha koi desu." But you never, never EVER use it as a short form of koibito. It is in all thought and sense simply and utterly wrong.

Sorry that I wrote you now a whole lesson about the problem with 'koi' but as I've said, it's sadly enough showing up so much in fanfics that I started to point it out to every author where I read a story that used the wrong word.

Now I am off to start on the sequel of yours.

Sincerely

Usagi-Atemu-Tom /_\

What the . . .?

Sorry, this story just happens to be the first one I've read since this comment posting thing was added.

I've already read this story before, and decided to read it again, but this comment thing distracted me . . .

Lololol Mana yur sooo disrespectful! "Ouji-sama" means "Prince" The correct title would have been "Ou-sama" "King" or even better "Heka-sama" which means "Your Majesty" or "Your Highness" (Not to be mistaken for "Heka" in Ancient Egyptian which means "Magic"...)

Note: Did not read the series backwards, I'm just rereading while I wait for chapter 19 of ED... or the Sequal whichever comes first...

i read the non edited version and notised you got all of the modern people in the sexual way exsept honda but put it as a flash back. why didnt you go into more detail?

Like I am not fond of homosexual stories I absolutely loved yours. The whole story just fits. There are some gay stories that just are written right that it just somehow all fits. I readlly do love the story.

I felt like reivewing here...I started to read this on AFF but never finished! i LOVE THIS STORY...though, the first chappie confused the hell outta me! *whine* if you wanna talk drop me a PM...i got my own YGO fic in the works and I wanna know if its ok...i'm really nervous about it...