I worship you. I swear, I would construct a temple or something, if a) I had the time b) or energy c) or skill d) or I wasn't just plain lazy.

But whatever, temple or no temple, you are still worshiped ;)

AWESOME! "I swore like there was no tomorrow"; that line was a classic!

I'd write a longer review, but I'm much to busy going and reading the rest ;)

Ohmygod AAAWESOMMME story! for a sec there I thought you weren't gonna tell us why markus did it, but you did, so S'all good!

OH SHIII-

There should really be a continuation of that. Lol, Wing, bird, heehee.

I love your story! Please tell maqui to update soon or else. tell her it's from fellow monster. :D

really good story!

wow...THE PLOT THICKENS EVEN MORE...much like beef stew _

jeebers! Otto's been shocked...and she's crying XDD *radiating meaness*

Indeed, stupid goddamn blasted puberty.

Hey, both of you, Billie the fourth sage, and Maqui T., hello hello! I thought this was the FUNNIEST STORY since...who knows when, and wait for my story, both of you! I think I shall read HIVE, and further understand. My favorite chapter was I KNEW IT. Ha! This is VERY FUNNY! And, please, please, WRITE A HARRY POTTER FANFIC! I think it would surely add to your already wide span of bragging rights. So...write more.

oh GAWD...nice plot twist, Billie/Maqui...whichever one has written this...

RITE MORE PLEEASE

PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS! IT'S RELLY GOOD!

Well done really good story

Hm, interesting. Originally when this started I thought that it wouldn't have a plot. Now it seems that I'm wrong. Still, this is a rather amusing little fic so I'll keep an eye on it.

Just a tip, though. Even if Otto is presently a girl, in his mind he still considers himself to be a boy, thus you should be referring to him as a 'he' rather than 'she'. From other people's perspectives, maybe he could be refeered to as a 'she' but only if they aren't one of the people who actually knew Otto beforehand. Then they can slip and say 'he' and fix it to 'she' sometimes, but an accidental sex change like that isn't going to be having people who have known Otto for years suddenly calling him a she without some effort. *shrugs* But that's just my take on the situation.

~Amaya

WOO! Edinburgh! THis is a pretty clever story!