I love it!

Great story!

I like it. You portray the characters very well and your writing style is very nice. I like how it wasn’t all that rushed, and that nobody fell in love and lived "happily ever" at the end. In total, your story was delightful, and a continuation of this would be appreciated.

SEQUEL!

It's clear that this wasn't intended to be a one shot but it works well enough as is.

Ahh! Wow! This is so good! Will you write more?

Love it!

Ah! It was amazing.

I9t's very hard nowadays to find a decent ScorpiousxRose story, most are just disturbing and boring, but yours was amazing, you should consider writing a longer story about it, I'm positive it would be excellent.

Three syllables: AH-mazing!

Truly original, and really fresh. Also good writing style and character portrayals that stay in-canon.

Lol, makes me wonder who won in the end :-)

Well, I think this was really quite good! Your writing is beautiful, but there are some places where you forgot to capitalize "Rose", and otherwise it was pretty much amazing! I loved that they could be friends :) Very sweet :)

That was awesome. I love how rose can be an angry little arse just like her mum. Extremely amazing and super cute. I love how you uncover more depth to the characters than there is on the surface.

love love love!

Aww, I was really hoping there would be more. I don't have any constructive criticism but I thought I was very well-written, you got their personalities perfect and everything.

That was adorable! Would have loved a longer version, but I understand ou had it on-hand and posted it as it was. It was extremely well written and quite funny too.