Ah, wonderfully written. Quite tragic, to be sure, but written with excellence none-the-less. There aren't enough good Aerith/Zack stories, and I'm glad I stumbled upon this jewel.

What a beautiful story. Short and sweet, and not overdone - the lack of detailed description leaves room for more raw sadness and it made me cry. Thank you!

This was actually really nice. It's very touching and at the same time it's subtle. As much as I love Zack/Aerith, and I do love them a lot, I dislike getting showered with angst. I think Aerith was a strong woman/girl so even though she loved him she had to move on. I think Zack was a part of her too. I'd like to think that happens with good friends, family members, and/or lovers. Your writing was very good as well. Thanks :)

Lovely and poignant and so, so perfect. What a fantastic job.

"She's not sure she's giving a smile, but she feels closer to one than before."

Perfect ending. 3

I don't know if it was intentional or not, but I love the biblical allegory at the end, with the resting on the seventh day.

It's so different to see a story about Aerith after Zack's death. I really like where you went with this; she seems very human and canon, while still retaining something unidentifiable that I've found in your other fics that I've read. It's very...you. But in a good way.

Thank you for sharing this!

Man, I feel so sad.

This is a very lovely piece. A genuinely human portrayal of Aerith is always difficult to come by. Thanks for the read.

It was magnificent.

Awesome work on this.

Short, sweet and very sad. I enjoyed this a lot, and think you have a great writing style here, especially because you manage to convey so much without spinning it out into pages and pages. Great work!

That was so sad, but sweet at the same time! I really enjoyed it :D

As tragic as it is beautiful. I absolutely adore this little story, the way you've presented the emotions that Aerith goes through in this story is so touching. Great job!