Too bad that Harry didn't ask to have Umbridge arrested since the Wizengamot was so anxious to please him. Also, Dumbledore, as he's the only one who could have put the power-binding seals and limiting seals, etc on Harry. You only briefly mentioned that and moved on.

This was a pleasant one-shot until Harry went full Super Sayan..

This Ginny is clearly nuts as the author has already stated, and so is this Ron. Too crazy even to be punished (unless the magical world is even more behind when it comes to justice as is generally accepted). You can only lock such people away for their own safety. Therefore that slavery business makes absolutely no sense. That having said, where did Luna come from so suddenly? For this bond to be credible, there would have to be some kind of backstory, although this might still be the salvageable part of the story.

Was fun to read the small story. I enjoyed it

If anyone continued this story, would like to read it. It's a great start!

Do you know of anyone who actually continued this? I really want to know, it sounds really interesting.

Anyone you know actually take up this challenge, or at the very least, turn it into a lemon?

I'm sorry, Harry, but you should have just let Ginny die.

A fun read! My favourite part was when Ron suddenly tried to claim Hermione as his slave - hilarious.

The only critique I have is that it doesn't really make sense for everyone to assure Harry that they're okay with Harry sleeping with Ginny and that she deserves it. Like, it's their daughter/sister. That's a really weird and creepy thing for any brother/father to say about their daughter regardless of what crime she committed and it seemed too OOC.

Dumbledore beeing weaker then harry is bullshit

I like this good, but adding Luna at the end was unneeded and ruined the story imo. This could have been completely fine just H/Hr. Don't get me wrong I love H/Hr/L but like I said Luna wasn't needed here

Okay, love the Lunar Harmony, as always, but holy Hell! Someone, call a mind healer! Ginny is fucking nuts! Harry is screwing the daylights out of Luna and Hermione and Ginny thinks he's pretending?! That's Ginny is his favorite?! By her 'logic,' Harry's also in love with her mother, father, all her brothers barring Ron, Dumbledore, a hundred aurors and any Ministry people who were present, including Umbridge.

That little girl is SICK!

By the way, your Dumbledore felt more like the Greater!Good Dumbledore that most people use, which isn't too far off from canon, in my opinion. Him trying to convince Harry and Hermione to not press charges against Ginny for trying to lock them into emotional slavery screams Greater Good manipulation. And your Ron was bad, but I've read worse. Make him a blood bigot and make it so that he's willing to rape Hermione to make her 'realize' that she 'wants' to be with him and 'loves' him, and you come close to matching the most evil Ron I've ever read about. Make him willing to kill others, such as Harry and Luna, to get his way and he will match the worst Ron I've seen.

On another note, I was going to do it anyway, but I will be using the 'he loves me and is faking it' Ginny you put together. I rather like the idea of her becoming Potter property, but I think it would be crazier if I have her do something like swearing herself into slavery for House Potter. Makes her seem even crazier, especially if she basically starts to act worse than a common whore in an attempt to make Harry stop faking it and get to his 'favorite' girl.

that was awesome i loved it
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Wtf dont flame somebody like that and do it as a guest. That just shows you're to cowardly to admit to saying that. And it's just a fanFICTION so wtf is your problem.

Arthur wouldn't have blamed Molly. It is not Molly's fault... even if Ginny did do it from her mother's tale it was her choice to do so. Her mother did not force her into it.
Also Yes... it was Ron that made Hermione upset and run to the girl's bathroom BUT who laughed along with him? Harry did.
But guess what... they were 11-year-old children at the time... CHILDREN. KIDS. Ron's CANON Words were of a child.
Ron didn't stand by the door it was him that knocked out the troll.
It was him that helped with the chess.
It was him that helped Harry down in the chamber with crazy ass Lockheart.
It was Ron that Harry had to save in the goblet of Fire, not Hermione... Harry cared for Ron you silly Weasley basher... despite him being jealous and upset at the beginning they still cared for each other. They are best friends.
Yes Ron and Ginny have their faults but so do every character.
I see this as a hater that was disappointed that Harry didn't get the main character. Well guess what...
I wanted Harry to be with Luna... but I don't make Ginny into some crazy girl sleeping around. What kind of sick fucks think of this stuff... you made her start doing stuff like this in her fourth year... a 14 year old girl! None of these characters are sick... only you for thinking such things about children. Fictional or not it's disgusting.