Wow ! Like srly nothing in a long time made me cry, like this story ! Amazing !

O.M.G. That was awesome. I can't believe that Tony killed his dad. Really I thought that it would be Ziva's father. But it was Tony's dad.
Ncie job with ll of the fanfics.

I can't believe that you almost killed off Shai. That was HORRIBLE! I was so scared my heart almst stopped. Thank gosh he is OK.

That was sooooo heart wrenching. I was about to cry.

Wow. After I had read Save Us I was like thats good. But this is like ten times better. You're a really good writer.

Just wanted to also let you know that I enjoyed this story too. Thanks

omg! i was crying the entire time i was reading this! you had me on the edge of my seat! when Tony shot his father i got chills & tears. you are an amazing writer & you should never give it up for a second. this is gonna take you really far in life. if you make a career out of this make sure i get the first copy of every book ;) you really do have an amazing gift that i have never seen in any of my friends or in any of these other fanfics. i know it probably doesnt mean much just coming from an average teenager with a crazy Tiva obsession but its 100% true. good luck & please keep writing. i am looking forward to reading all of your stories & leaving my comments. good luck once again & keep up the fantastic work. your talent will no doubt make you famous :)

Glad you finished lovely work!

OMG! I think I just melted from the sweetness of this.

What a perfect ending.

You do have a way with words my dear. Well done!

Oh, squee! How sweet! Glad things are looking up. It is definitely time for some good news.

I wanna go on the pirate adventure too!

I am so glad that the antidote was real.

Happy first. Tony has a "mini me". How adorable! Love it!

But Tony's father (and I use that term loosely). Ugh, and I thought that Eli was a bastard.

At least he has the antidote. Hopefully it is real and not a bluff. Poor Tony.

Just like Gibbs to just up and stop in the middle of the highway! Loved the conversation between him and Ziva as well. "You haven't killed him yet." LOL!

Shai's attitude is one of the things that I love about taking care of kids. They just have a spirit and a way of seeing things that keeps you going. Though you do get the ones that have been broken by the world, that were hurt on purpose. Those are the ones that kill me.

Glad that they have been able to raise their kids away from the 'hell' that they both were raised in. Tony and Gibbs better find this guy...

How frightened and helpless they must feel. Tony (and Ziva) wanting nothing more than to make it all better yet not able to do anything. Being there is huge though. I know it makes a difference for most of our kids.

No idea who wanted revenge on Tony, though Eli is always a possibility. (Sorry this took so long, I had to re-read Save Us and the rest of this first!)

I have just completed reading Run it was a wonderful conclusion, I hope you write more Tiva soon.