hello

hey I was wondering when you'd be continuing Videl the saiyan PM me back to let me know

Please hurry and continue.
Also, could put a Future Pan somewhere?

This story is fantastic, I've read it Ch1-34, and you did incredible keeping with the original novelization! Videl and her mother Vanera fit nearly perfect into the story. I can see how Vanera is like an older sister toward Goku. The growing relationship between Gohan and Videl is fantastic, and I can't wait to see what you do with the Trunks, Androids, and Cell Saga.

I enjoy this story keep up the Great Work

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Amazing chapter! I love the novelization feel to this story including in great detail of DBZ world. Awesome job with Frieza saga.

When you start Trunks saga, in Future Trunks' timeline can you include a Future Goten, I find Future Gohan surviving and coming with Trunks to past unnecessary and takes away the stakes plus Goten was born in the same year Android's arrival (in F-Trunks timeline) and cell games just there's a months gap so it won't be hard to include him. Plus his character really needs more attention and have a chance to be in the spotlight.

Great job keep it up. I can't wait to see what happens next update soon

sweet I want more.

Oh I need more

Damn we now will move onto the next arc can't wait

Sweet man keep it up.

sweet we need more.

Wow good work dying to see more.

Oh man good chapter and I agree with both you and Thyself, Gohan and Videl are young but hey time will tell what will happen.

Well damn sweet fight I guess no fight with Vegeta and Gohan but I mean we know why he didn't