You rally jumped all over the place with this chapter I was beyond confused. Update soon!

Things are starting to come together. i am guessing this is the run in of vamps from the time around Emily's wedding

So she planned it. You sneaky little ...that explains the necklace that Jake found in the previous chapter.

Now Im confussed I thought they were planning something from a year in advance...

I don't think jake was there.

I am thinking that this christian guy will be what Jake was to Bella

I would have just hunted on my own...

Glad to see that she realized she can;t have anything other than Jake

I'm not sure about this guy and still concerned about her lack of emotions with the imprint she should not be feeling much toward anyone else

Jake is being an ass. I am not going to like this new mystery guy. I do like how Ness has an I don't care attitude going on

How could Jake even think that ness didn't want him. Edward is going to set Jake striaght or at least I hope so!

Okay so you have the Ness point of view being current and Jakes POV being in the future where they are planning.

Gabby and Ness seem like they will get along well. David seems cute but not too sure about this third character who doesn't seem to have a name, please do not have a love interest there. I am ready to know what is going on back in Forks and curious as to why no one has come after Ness yet to rescue

Who's there? Hopefully a Cullen or better yet Jake! Doubt it though

A babysitter? That seems to be a little odd and cannot imagine ness being a babysiter for anyone.