Wow, that was so sad.

Umm, ouch. There goes my heart. Oh, and look,now you're standing on it as well...

I honestly prepared myself to read this, I said to myself "This is going to be sad as hell" and "I must prepare myself" and I still WASN'T READY

Well, that was fantastically depressing.
I'm crying now.

That was so sad! Really well written though, and I could totally see that happening too, and it's nice to have a dose of "possible" in fanfics :-) Great work!

Ouch.

That ending stung.

Amazing story.

That's always the way to go, isn't it. Dammit, Jim, why you gotta be so noble and heroic and stuff? The Enterprise just isn't the same without you and-and you're just too alive and bright and golden to die! Still, I prefer the way Jim goes in this rather than canon. Alone and crushed by a bridge? I refuse to accept that. Categorically refuse!

Also, the one about using Jim as a virgin sacrifice? Hilarious to the highest degree, as is the one about the female taking testicles after sex.

Oh poor Bones losing his best friend after all the other times he had been able to fix great strpy though thanks for sharing xx

Quite a good story overall; I rather liked the contrast between the initial humour and the tragic ending. Humour and angst/tragedy tend to be some of my favorite fanfiction genres, so seeing them put together is always extra appreciated. You kept these short and simple, but they were well-written and entertaining. Nicely done.

D: on noes...poor bones..:(

i hate you, you made me one bloody chapter you made me cry. jim shouldn't die, it's just not in the natural(or unatural order of things).this really is a horrible story, but in a good way, if that makes sense. Horrible because it makes you cry, but beautiful because it just is awesome,really it is.

it...he...but...no! im crying now. jim kirk is not allowed to die!

(it was still really good though.)

where the hell are my kleenex?

You know I loved this fic and how unpredictable it was in the quality of the ways that Bones saved Kirk's life all those times. But, here comes the but, I don't read slash and I despise it when an author doesn't include a slash warning in their summary, author notes at the very least. It made me /really/ uncomfortable to get to that point (w/out any preemptive warning) and threw me straight out of the realm you created so wonderfully. So I liked the fic's first so many, I did, I just ask that you include a slash warning for anyone else that comes and reads this fic. It'll clear up any uncomfortable situations for anyone else and not make anyone upset when they read this w/out expecting slash and that's what they get at the one point. So you're a good writer, a little slash warning would just be nice though.

*huge distraught eyes*

O.O

NO!

Wow that was an emotionally gripping tale. Never cried from a fanfiction before now, so good job!