This was really beautifully written

I randomly clicked on this story and I'm glad I did. It gave me a serene and peaceful feeling. Your writing style is very beautiful...
So, um.. I live near Darjeeling and the tree gardens and mountains are very familiar to me. I was juat surprised when I saw the location of your story. I mean I don't get to see fanfics taking place in my country, so I kinda felt happyDon't stop writing. You are an amazing writer...

Reading this fic gave me a calm and serene feeling, the descriptions of the tea mountains was very nice. I liked how you described it from Allen's point of view. :)

Love this one too. I like how they moved from desperation, into acceptance and hopefully love in the future. Allen needs Kanda badly but i glad you didn't made him into a weak clingging person, he still has determination and hope for the future with Kanda at his side. Love all your yullen fic, hope you will make more of them :)

wow, good job. i liked it. :D you should write more!

I love the idea of other Innocences affecting the Noah like Crown Clown _

Erm...

...Epilouge?

Aww it's Over? I really wish it would go on it's such a good story with great description and details that leave pictures

Man I've been mass reviewing a whole heap of stories I owe reviews to today.. I swear I've reviewed a tonne of your stories already~

Loving your writing as usual~ I like the vividness of the settings you create with your words but it's not overdone too. You have a simple yet descriptive style of writing that I like. :)

Your "lime-ish" scenes are also very sensuous and enjoyable (lol I sound like a total creep) to read~ XD

I read this on lj earlier, but it's still as lovely to read now as it was the first time. :( 3

Gaarin: Aw! I love birds... Sad... But good! Yeah, this is going into our club, right Mizu?

Mizuhara: Whatevs, busy.

I think my brain just spontaneously combusted.

That was absolutely BEAUTIFUL. Once again, great writing. Absolute props for incorporating Allen's struggle with the Fourteenth, it was tragic but totally necessary. And Kanda's angry concern for him was so...I don't know. I would say touching, but we all know that Kanda cannot be associated with such a word. Haha. Anyway, great job!

~Michi P.

that was interesting. poor allen. kand's a bit hard ot read here, but i suppose, well, it's kanda. anyhow. i liked it! i hope you write more

Wow. I absolutely loved the imagery. And that was a really creative mission... I wish I could think of stuff like that. It would certainly improve my stories. xD And the interactions between Kanda and Allen are so realistic! Amazing story, really. Keep writing~ )

really god story, the smut scean was a bit short but other then that it was good