I'm gone. You kinda ruined the story for me. And it's mentality of the reader to expect good results. You disrespect grammar you disrespect the readers. Then what readers do you have left? Just the other writers who try to take ideas from other people's story's it's a lame cycle.

i think the vorpal bunny and die potato is having a grand time now.
hey kisame it's time for dress and makeup we have date with some (monster high) dolls and a karaoke bar. we are gonna sing "Tako Luka Tuna Fever".
what, just be glad they haven't asked where babies comes from yet. after all i somehow think that conversation is gonna end up with them raiding orochimaru's stack and trying out the bdsm things on one unlucky magikarp.
though they might end up buying lacy underwear and teddy for the blond bomber if you say he need a b-day present. talking about that i wonder if sasori will like the dolled up look your sporting after all you are tipping him the skales. (if that doesn't make sense you free to interpret that the way you like)

congratulation you just realized the powers of the ultimate evil, more milk and cookies karama?

well they can stab your eyes with those though. and they give a mean kick, giggle.

But even through all that you are a hilarious writer and sorry about the comment but really I like this story so jeep on writing for the sake of the world

Why do u keep on doing now his nnmes Natasha because somebody dosent think its good enough please stop it its annoying

plz write more

LMFAO, no more, no more. God I can't breathe. Keep up the good work.

they are soo cute

So, how would a rainbow pilot a giant robot? :)

This story is pure genius
I read this when everyone was sleeping it was hard not to laugh out loud at this story
Ja ne
Make more funny stories

I love your story, so few humor stories make me laugh, I have a distorted sense of humor. I'm not saying that you have a distorted sense of humor, simply that your humor allows my sense of humor to fit your humor.

I demand a My Little Pony reference! The laws of nature, the universe and all that shit are being broken, why not add the ultimate of all castrations?! I will gift you a pie made of cookies!

It is from the white rabbit in "Alice in wonderland."

god i love this story the randomness is hilarious