| Reviews for Between the Brushstrokes |
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   ryouko70 chapter 22 . 4/9/2015 Wow. I'm pretty drained after this! What a fantastic story! Well planned out and well executed! Absolutely amazing read from beginning to end! |
| Yukihapax chapter 22 . 11/17/2014 Enticing, true and heart-moving. The abused dystopic imaginary quickly became the only real world for these wonderful characters, which you described throughfully and amazingly well. I'd like this to be canon version, and that's really all I should say. Thanks for the fine quality entertainment. |
| AlithiaSigma chapter 22 . 6/15/2013 Manhattan did it on purpose! Lulu make a nice replacement for Adrian in Bubastis' place. Good story, slash easily ignored. |
| AlithiaSigma chapter 21 . 6/15/2013 Laurie calling him "Walter"... |
| AlithiaSigma chapter 20 . 6/15/2013 Schrödinger's partner: He only exists when he wants you to know he exists. It's still a little awkward with Rorschach's mask off... |
| AlithiaSigma chapter 19 . 6/15/2013 I like the way you put the slash in the last chapter so I can just skim over and ignore it. I don't like Ror/Dan slash. |
| AlithiaSigma chapter 18 . 6/15/2013 Rorschach with children: Always cute. Smart kitty. Kinda like Nanny Ogg's cat from Discworld books. |
| AlithiaSigma chapter 17 . 6/14/2013 Why can I not like Laurie? In any fanfic? She's not a Mary Sue, she's not badly written, I just don't like her. huh. |
| AlithiaSigma chapter 16 . 6/14/2013 Is your Rorschach a telepath? |
| AlithiaSigma chapter 7 . 6/12/2013 "Steal phone books! Call in sick! Storm Veidt's headquarters!" |
| AlithiaSigma chapter 5 . 6/12/2013 OOOOooohh.., Ominous... |
| AlithiaSigma chapter 1 . 6/12/2013 Good start |
| Viviane Renard chapter 22 . 9/20/2012 Great story! You took a really unique idea for a dystopia, and ran with it. You did a great job with the characters, showing how this new world changed them all, some more radically than others. Dan's still pretty much the same lovable guy he always was, but Rorschach, Adrian, and Laurie all really changed. And while they went through some tough times to get there, I think they're better people because of these changes. Rorschach learned to let people in, Adrian humbled himself, and Laurie matured. Life's not perfect, but I like the optimism you end this story with. |
| The Paper Dragon chapter 22 . 8/16/2012 So I just finished reading and i must say this is really great. You handled all the characters really well, especially Ror and gosh i just love him in all your stories but especially this one. |
| aSqueeIntheDistance chapter 10 . 11/23/2011 Hot damn you impress me. This is very, very clever. ("You quit," he said, disappearing down the tunnel, but who stopped coming around first, back in '75; who started working alone, a solitary shadow of the man he'd been? Who quit on who?) (Who walked up to a man who could grant any desire and screamed for oblivion?) |
