that just sucks sorry

I hope there is

more,and get jerk

face(jake)out of

the picture,it's

surpose to be liley

awe this one too? boo! lol

come back here and finish this story! now! lol

i really do love your writting and think you do a very great cerative job at it, please dont leave us hanging (like i did with mine lol) and finish em up

I wish you would finish, because I want things to be okay between Lilly and Miley :( please?

you can describe everything beautifully, including the landscape in Tennessee. I think I know what happened...

this story is taking direction and its going really well. i like the description in the first chapter, btw. interested to see what happens between miley and lilly next:D

I love the story so far! Your detail in your story is really good which I think makes every story that much more interesting! Good Job! & Keep Writing!

poor girls.

man the paparazzi's are vicious animals. all they do is ruin people's lives.

this was another wonderful chapter. so detailed and just plain out awesome. great job.

update soon.

I have to say, you write brillantly!

There is so much detail packed into just this chapter, I especially loved your description of the orchard.

Great start I can't wait to read more.

yay! another story from you )

this is a really good start so far!

i'm really interested in finding out what the headlines say and stuff. probably something with lilly/lola and hannah/miley, huh?

anyway, great start so far! can't wait for more D

update soon.

Great start. Definitely a lot going on in Miley's head. Looking forward to the development of this story. Keep up the good work. Update soon.

Whoa, I'm really intrigued! This is a fresh story, with a fresh angle-and I can't tell you how excited I am to see where this is going! Can't wait for the next update!