holy sh * i hate you i wish i could come up with something like this,

i'm trying to find something to critique but i can't.
the story is awesome, i love how you use the characters and actual abilities from the game, (drive and magic) and i like the creepy but funny Roxas.
keep up the good work

I now HATE you sora is like THE omni-storied character!

No offense, i liked it, poor Sora and please update soon

FawnxSora *shivers* please let Kairi come back!

Aww, i wasnt expecting her reaction, but she isnt ready... does that mean she just doesnt want to accept her feelings cause shes afraid?

I just started reading... I really liked it! its really good, and thank you for the Sokai or Kairora or watever ugh too many mash ups.

Anyways thanks for the SoraXKairi! (Even though im only in the first) keep updating!

Okay. You are an amazing author. There are no other words for it. I'm jealous of your skill. Read mine? :) Theyre not nealry as good as yours but you may or may not like them.

AWESOME CHAPTER! OMG RIKU! I never liked him! Poor Sora~ TT

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Hey! I just started reading this story and I have to say that this is the most interesting KH fic that I've read in a while. It's really well written. I love the talks Roxas and Sora have, they make me laugh. The story overall though is so interesting. I can't wait to finish this one and start reading the sequel.

i loved this chapter. i loved how you tortured Roxas too. its was hilarious on how Sora was like being strangled

I think Roxas woulda said THERE'S A TIME TO FIGHT AND A TIME TO RUN LIKE A LITTLE BITCH, SO MAKE TRACKS DAMMIT!

...

what have you done to Roxas?

he's.. he's... hilarious.

good job, on Pervy Sage Roxy!

*two thumbs up*

my god!

Sora's mom?

lol, love Riku's sibs.

wow.

IS KAIRI THE HERO?

*happy dance*

It's about FREAKIN' time!

BTW, awesome. just awesome.

*glances at own story and winces*

making me feel guilty here...

Oh My GOD! That was the most unbelievably mind blowing ending i've ever read in my life. So Riku betrayed Sora for jealosy and want of power. Sora is alive but a dark entity. Cant wait to read the sequel.