This is so good!

Can I please get the nc-17 version? I loved the way you wrote this, pulling the reader i9n, and not just making it about what they are doing. Thanks :)

I would like the nc-17 version, please. I'm also on livejournal as Stego21.

Girl... wow. This is seriously depressing. A good story, nonetheless. My congrats. Hope you come back to writing more about these two... and dare give them a proper ending. Nobody has ever dared to and pulled it off decently haha. But I'm sure you could. Have a good one!

Amazing story! I haven't visited ff in a while and was blown again anew by your work. Hope you continue to write more for, in my opinion, a severely under appreciated fandom here on ff. And if you could shoot me the link to your NC17 version now that I'm old enough to read it, that's be splendid! :D

Can I have access to the uncut version? My LJ is Amour_Vincit_93

Could you send me the explicit version to this fanfic? Either message it to this account or email it at . I would like it if you could add me on lj. My account is Icewinterangel. Thank you! :)

This is great! Please send me the NC-17 version. My live journal name is hobochiquiee

Wow! fantastic story. vey well written! im new to LW fanfic but i always wished laurie and jo wouldve been together! id love to read the uncut version

Hi, I was wonder if I could read the NC-17 version? Or could I view it on your livejournal? My name on livejournal is icewinterangel

I've always wanted Laurie and Jo to end up together and this is how I've always viewed it: passionate, fumbling, and yet, just so unreasonably, irrevocably, irresistably in love. good job!

PS - How could I acquire the uncut version? I really want to read more!

OMG, I can't believe I missed this before. THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING. SO DARK, SO MUCH ANGST - it literally made me ache.

"The world blurs before her eyes, as though the faint frost of the outdoors had moved into the manor she tended for him here. "Maybe not. But you didn't have to make the choices you went through with. Not with my sister. Not when you knew I was-"

Waiting. For him to come back. For him to ask again. For him to do what ought to have been done already."

That KILLED me.

Pleaseeeee continue?

Hi! I would love to see the NC-17 version of this story, but unfortunately I discovered it long after you'd already locked it on LJ. : ( If you could send it to me that would be great. You could private message it to me if possible, if not, message me anyway and I'll provide an email address you can send it to. Thanks so much!

I loved this! I hope you'll continue it. I would love to read the uncut version of your send me the link at: pagonauf !