This was a cool story! I liked it!

I loved that version Was even best than the original. Sam's POV made it more detailed, you know? ~

I really had a good time reading it D

See ya next one o/

Rosetta

I read this one a bit ago... then I realized it was part two of someone else's fic... so I went to read that one, then came back to this one. Not to offend Enkidu07, I *whispermumbles*liked*mumblewhispers* this one better *shuffles feet awkwardly*. There was something about this fic that was just fantastic. I liked Sam's perspective of the whole situation and how he was simply, and understandably more cognizant of all the details. I liked how he was able to coach Dean through the initial pain while cleaning him up and then just being there. I loved poor Dean's confusion regarding why Sam knew he was sick - "I know you like my back pocket". And how Sam simply knows that his brother is sick and still has the effects of the toxins and willingly offers himself as a focus point. You have NAILED the sibling dynamic here. But god, "This pie is so ain't sweet enough" look *giggles*.

You guys should do this more often, and to your best stories. That way I get to read the best stories twice, and not just repeating them. I am delighted at your creativity!

AMAZING! The first paragraph had me! I LOVED everything I dont think I have have a favorite part because it was all my favorite! I loved Sam being the care taker in this one, he took over the role so well! When Sam thought about Dean being mad at him for getting the car dirty and knowing that meant he would be okay...totally got me I loved it! And of course your amazing details! You remember everything...and you dont go overboard with them! I REALLY LOVED THIS STORY! Amamzing fantastic job! Cant wait for more!

Nicely written, a bit long it parts, but a good shot :)

Aw, what an awesome expansion on the drabble :D - I totally love sick/hurt Dean and fussy Sammy, so this just made my day LOL XD

Wonderful!

Hugs and luv

Mish :D

I love everything I loved before and I love the melted chocolate all over everything and Sam washing it off his hands at the motel, and I love the images of Dean waiting in the room while Sam's getting ready - the sweat and his hands doing all those things and the white knuckles and his distractedness - and then too his warm, pale, freckled back. Well done!

Nice story.

Sam did awesome comfort here. Loved that and the toxin making him anxious.

I love the part when Sam wanted to take a shower... so cute! ;)

Hugs,

Lee

Good job describing it from Sam's POV.

you did a great job stressing how well they know each other. i like it. i don't think there were too many noticeable continuity gaps with this and the original. it's well done. write on!

You completed a great story perfectly. Loved the idea of the POV swap and you pulled it off so well. great read. Thanks.

that was wonderful. did you write that this morning after getting ZERO sleep last night? If so, I am even more impressed! It was fun helping you stay awake all night. Teehee. Great work!

I knew I would love it! You and your sensory detail and all of the hurty goodness. Yay! Thank you so much for fleshing this out. I think I enjoyed it more from Sam's POV than I did Dean's. And having the two together was awesome! My two favorite parts were:

#1 when Sam misread the "I'm not a pansy look" as being "This pie isn't sweet enough." Made me chuckle and reread about 4 times.

#2 Sam assessing Dean back at the motel room. So much good imagery that I never got to see before... like: Dean's hands are shaking, when he rubs them together nervously, rubbing his stomach one second and rubbing his forearm the next. Yes please. that is amazing. Twitchy and unfocused and unsettled. You were brilliant and I love this perspective! There were even a few parts that surprised me - like when the wound was bleeding. I really thought it wasn't when I was from Dean's POV and I had to rethink it and fill in the new info. I loved it!

These were all great. You guys did a wonderful job.