Well, I read this, it was good, basically it did most of the stuff I would have hoped for the actual series to have done.

Excellent work! I loved it. You should be very proud.

I'm only partway through this story, but it seems like you have an excellent grasp of creating interesting, original characters. It's quite rare.

What a satisfying epilogue. And I look forward to the potential fanfic series you're planning that's set after this. I really would like to see more of a sequel to NJO, which was something I think was denied from us, the fans, with Dark Nest and the subsequent post-NJO stories published. I mean, for example, I'd like to see just how Jacen had really been affected by his final battle with Onimi, b/c that was something that had been touched upon 3 times in the whole of post-NJO. Here, which felt more like a proper sequel, or jumping-off point from NJO, you mention Onimi quite frequently, and something tells me that under your hands, you might explore the full implications of what that final battle meant to Jacen personally. After all, that was a pretty big moment for him. But if you're not going to do that, or if you're going to focus on it a lot less than I think, I still look forward to your series anyway. Let's just hope it won't be drawn out over a 3-year-period this time lol. :)

Well, that was a surprisingly satisfying finale. I'm impressed with this, and with the story overall. I hope you wrap this up with a good little epilogue soon.

Well, it was a Solo brother either way. Damn I was close on the mark. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Definitely human; has to be Jacen, as I've been saying.

Okay, now I know that the Master is actually Jacen. And good thing Ziil didn't die.

Oh, yeah, that's why Hassk is awesome. And so long Hunner.

Lol at the cliche.

Tahiri's going to save Hassk ironically, eh?

Now time to find Hassk; this should head to an interesting climax.

Hunner is gonna be a secondary antagonist this late in the game? All right.

I like how Keenah managed to somehow seamlessly blend together the Yuuzhan Vong religion and the Force idea together.

Well, that was easy in finding out where Hassk went.