A good story and an interesting version of the movie. I've enjoyed reading it. A few grammar mistakes, but over all well written. Thank you for sharing this with us.

i'm missing most of the chapters i think i could have read w and p

domt kill amanda that would be bad

you may not own star trek but how dare you call them stubborn idiots that was very very very very and a 100000000 very nasty of you would you like it if someone called stubborn idiot. spock/kirk are not

was the man that broke into the kirk's home was he the vulcan named spock

So glad Amanda lived. Spock is going to be so pissed when he finds out what those red shirts did to Jim!

Just found this. Enjoying it immensely. Hope electricity comes back on soon. I only have 40% on my phone!

I sincerely enjoyed reading this fic and how it developed a relaitionship from the ground up.

I posted my review too fast last chapter but I really liked how while Jim could never forgive Nero, he pitied him and still grieved for the man he could've been. Goodness, thank you for having me finally warm up to Uhura, her intervention with Jim over Spock and Jim's realization of how she was in love with Spock without the benefit of having her feelings returned had me cave, and gratefully so because I want to like her. I like Uhura's explanation of Spock's compartmentization of a younger Jim into the brother box. Spock's warning and Jim's oh shit at the end was a fun way to end the story. That you for writing!

:D! They survived! I forgot to mention how awesome badass Pike was in the last chapter.

I love their easy affection, it brings warmth to my heart. Their possibly last kiss and goodbye had me at the edge of my seat.

The meld was beautiful. I groaned when Spock punched Jim though lol. Yay for Sarek stepping up for his son. Kudos again to Chekov and Sulu, yay for everyone who believes in Jim. Spock kissed Jim? I couldnt tell, I assumed he brushed his fingers on Jim's face haha

This story is seriously so good, I love Jim's commentary, him meeting up with Spock Prime and Scotty.

It is totally awesome how you are adapting canon into a so much more satisfying way 3 The dudes pranking Jim and that's how he ended up stranded was a good thwist because I didn't want Spock to be behind that.

Amanda and Sarek are both alive, Sulu and Chemov were awesome, I was happy at each mention of Spock's aversion to Uhura's touches because seriously lady what are these liberties you take? Thank goodness Spock finally did something about it. I love the mention of the shopkeepers who treated Jim like a person. Thank goodness that Spock can get a chance to let go with Jim by his side again.