Well this was great love NaruSaku could easily become a story but it's still great

I love it so much love between them. Please added some chapters. Make this into a romance and adventure story between Naruto and Sakura. and change rating M. NaruSaku forever

This is the sweetest fic I ever read ! Great writing! Please write more narusaku!

Aw I loved this! :')

This was a really sweet one-shot. I was glad that I didn't have to wait for the ending for Naruto and Sakura to get together.

Could you add more chapters?

sweet story

Another really cute one tosakuai!

Can't wait to read more when you write more!

I absolutely love this story. It's so touching and emotional and sweet. Keep up the great work!

OMG! NARUSAKU forevs! They belong together! 3 your stories! They are so cute and fluffy!

very nice story. love it

Contains a number of spelling errors, several run on sentences, and is lacking some description.

That being said, it's a very good story, with a nice take on the pairing. I like the ideas presented in it, and the respect for the characters you seem to have.

Good story I definitely enjoyed it. The only major problem I had with it is that u had alot of spelling mistakes English and Japanese. For example shiso (master) is actually shishou. And Ja Na is supposed to be Ja Ne. Simple stuff just keep in mind for future reference that ther are alot of anime/manga fans who will hassle you. I don't really care that much but I figured to bring it up.

Its a very sweet story and the title comes out right :D

I always loved these sweet moments bewteen these too because it feels so right to me.

Your style is very good and it's very pleasant to read you.

Very good job on this romantic and cute story

aw...i love your fic...it is very romantic and cute...i really enjoyed reading it and can't wait for a new chapter...keep it coming and awesome job