ok i just started reading this story and and i've read the previous stories of it and its good and all but what the hell is it about the queso dip?

Yay! Jasper escaped! Now all he has to do is get back home to the family. It was a really good chapter.

you are a freaking writing prodegy, your stories freaking rock! i was immediately hooked and have read the last three parts.

You just keep on getting better and better. Truly, you're almost unrecognizable from the author that began this wonderful saga.

Fallen, a most wonderful and interesting character and a fabulous turn of fate.

Jewel, how interesting and deserved was his demise. Accidently falling into a giant vat of acid, the Fallen is truly a cruel one.

You now what, I can't wait to read the next part of this saga.

Ta

Master of teh Boot

Wow, that was actually a really good fight scene.

Again, it's got your trademark humor and your ususal emotional involvement.

Gazzy, man, that's worth a thousand lols. Somebody should get him a bottle of peptobismol for his birthday.

And Edward being crowned the new King, that was actually a very powerful moment. Well written and well characterized.

I loved the ending of this where Felicia and Albert kiss without actually making physical contact. That's almost too romantic.

Ta

Master of teh Boot

Once again, you're sense of humor has hit all the right buttons with me.

Having Maria in this was great. Surprisingly, she was a great source of humor. I love how she randomly turned David Bowie the singer. I'd never see that one coming :D Also, it was most hilarious when Bella called Maria a psycho biatch.

And now the fight is about to start. I wouldn't miss this for the world.

Ta

Master of teh Boot

You're getting better with your writing. You're better able now to get together various subplots and things down.

I thought that the death of Derek was actually darkly humorous and somewhat unexpected. Given how he acted in the movie, I can't say that he didn't have it coming. That scene where he's trying to make excuses was both funny and very emotionally involving.

I thought that Bella's second thoughts about becoming a vampire were very interesting. Renee has really thrown her daughter for a loop. Rose having money bet on this was too funny.

I liked Insectosarus's speech, that was more hilarious than anything.

You're very witty, did you know that? It showed especially when you had Max talking about how they trust nobody.

All in all, great Insecto-pov.

ta

Master of teh Boot

Of all the people I expected to show up, Renee was the last of them. I have to say that her showing up was just the greatest thing. I love how she takes the idea that her daughter is a vampire. It's just so opposite of what everybody expected of her. SHe's mad that Bella didn't tell her, but she'd ecstatic that her daughter is a vampire.

Renee, ever the delightful Flake.

I like how they're still going through with the play. It was cool how Dr. Roach was conflicted about it, but that's what freinds are for.

Ta

Master of the Boot

I thouht that the last chapter was good, but his is even better. This turned out to be so scary.

Jewel is truly showing himself off as a wicked sadist. The way he casually executed those underlings was very cold.

I liked the idea of dinosaurs with lasers though, very Turok. I like Turok and dinosaurs.

You've proven yourself capable of breaking the mould, that alone is worth all the reviews in the world.

Ta

MAster of the Boot

Oh, this was quite the scary chapter. That laser weapon was extremely cool. It was quite the chilling thing when Edward could see the weapon act in slow motion. Peter is going to be pissed beyond all measure. I think that Laura's sincere desire for world domination was scary, not comical. That's hard to pull off. Congrats.

On the happier side though, I liked Edward's thoughts about having his own little branch of the family and how cool that is.

BEst chapter so far in this story.

ta

Master of the Boot

Fang, the stoic lad has finally cracked his shell. I have to congragulate you, nobody's ever gotten Fang to babble and make it look natural.

Also, nobody has ever captured Max pov the way you have.

Fang is such a naysayer, especially when he's all leary about Nudge and Iggy's relationship. I guess that the flock is becoming more like the Cullens.

I though it was really funny how Fang hates the term "flock."

Ta

Master of the Boot

Hey, I'm here. Sorry for being late with a review but I never miss one.

I'm glad that you continued with this. It's a very good story.

I like how Iggy was there to defend nudge in her time of need. THat's what family does, especially the flock.

Ta

MAster of the Boot

Stephan and Vladimir were really cool characters. I'm glad that you have them here. That Michael Jackson joke was really funny. I massively enjoy your use of pop culture and current events.

But I must say, that you know how to strike an emotinal cord. That moment where the Snake lady asks if they're free . . . it was just a really powerful moment.

Ta

Master of the Boot

Jasper was really awsome in this one. I love the way that he just freaked out Jewel with his virtual indestructibility. My favorite was how Jasper put his head back on like a hat.

What's really emotinally touching is how he's bringing the two geniuses with him. That's very merciful, very Cullen like.

Ta

Master of teh Boot

Susan doing yoga, it' just is so possible.

I love what you do with Bob. He's never boring or predictable. Every single line of his is full of fresh laughs. And Link's sarcasm at Bob's niavity is just wonderful.

Ta

Master of teh Boot