Great Story!
Pura Vida!

That was unbelievable. This is one of the few Lockhart stories that doesn't portray Lockhart as a heartless, egostatical, dunderhead, and is all the better for it.

I read this story once and reviewed annonymously as funny rose. I love it now as much as I loved it ever, and have come to put it in my favorites!

What a great little gem! There's not much I can critique because I don't see a single flaw. I mainly just wanted you to make sure you knew how good this was, painfully under-reviewed. The story is terrible, by that I mean that the tragedy is terrible. And without ever giving the girl any dialogue you've created a really moving character, as well as some original details. The imagery of the death is haunting, even beautiful. You've also given Gilderoy more depth, and with a situation that seems plausible. Then by the end of the story you've mannaged to sincerely bring the sympathy back to Lockhart. WOW!

... Five stars. Pure... freaking... awesome.

And that's all I have to say about that.

Never really seen one of these before and I thought it was well written enough to warrant a review. Great little drabble.