I really like this story! It's awesome that kaito's a secret agent (in a nutshull) ! :D

Ughs. All my feels. Absolutely love it.

I really enjoyed this. Thank you for writing it.

Awesome - thanks for writing this!

This was really good! Lots of drama and angst, just how I thought Aoko would react

I loved this. You handled the situation with the children very delicately and tastefully, considering the subject matter. I also liked how you balanced the drama with romance, etc. Very nicely done!

This was an amazingly brilliant story and I absolutely loved reading this beautiful work of art. I might be laying it on a little thickly but I honestly enjoyed how the story progressed and the way you wrote the characters. I can't wait to read the sequel.

I love this series you created I hope this actually happens! it would be great.

p.s are you going to continue this series because it is so good and I would like to know what Hakuba thinks of this.

Awwwwwwwwwww an excellent ending to an excellent story

Oh my goodness this was amazing! Ive been doing a lot of reminiscing about detective conan and ugh the feelings just came flooding back lol

This is...Awesome! And also very realistic and natural flowing. Kudos to you.

this was an amazing story, and it better be what happens if katio is ever caught awaight the sequal!

I kill Snake for hurting my Kaito. Really good. Now not saying that Kaito will ever get caught but if he does let's hope it goes this way. Love that last scene with Aoko. I was wondering why they never asked Kaito about Snake. That is a no go topic anyway. That would have ended really badly. Speaking of Snake is he still alive? Is the BO still after him? Anyway good and hope to see ya later.

Meimi? I thought Chikage was Kaito's mother! It was official! not Meimi...

Nice visual ending ;)
I loved this story, it was grounded very realistically storywise, world and characters as well, and you added so much more to the canon settings. You have a very natural build-up in your writing; I never have to fill in the gaps of missing background details when characters are moving about (like pop! suddenly person A has travelled from one room to another with nothing in between), which I find quite common.
I'm off to read your sequel now, but I'd suggest you have a friend or two read over stuff before you post it since it always helps, but also there were a few missing words and spelling mistakes here and there, not enough to jar the reader, but minutely distracting nonetheless. Long criticisms awgawd! :D
Great stuff.