I completely agree with you, it would take out half fanfics minim and it would be a waste, could you tell me when this is happening because this is the first time I've heard of it. Your story is amazing too and I hope it isn't pulled down, please update :)

Personally I don't see the need for you to scan over it. It's good as is man. And I hope there's good explaination of why our favorite princess was exiled.

lol, two years later. But hey, at least your moving forward.

I like the step up in technology, that always spices things up.

Links business sounds pretty well organized and I'm curious to hear more about it.

Looking forward to the next chapter when you get around to it.

Read ya Later

Hmm interesting

Cool story so far, can't wait to see where it goes. Then I'll be able to give more constructive critizem. (sorry if I spelled that wrong).

Wow! That was amazing! I really enjoyed it! I wonder why Zelda was placed in exile. Aw well, she has Link now and that's all that matters! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Retarded, yes!

I was liking how this was going and then it ended. I guess I'll just have to be patient.

I could always write something myself to pass the time...nah.

I'm seriously looking forward to the next chapter.

Hope to see you on XBL and finally see how good you are ;).

Read ya Later

Pretty good chapter, friend. I hope to see the next chapter soon.