| Reviews for A Hogwarts Christmas Carol |
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   HoneyBear84 chapter 11 . 7/13/2018 loved it |
| Xion Cifer1 chapter 11 . 6/13/2018 Good story madam with ONE exception. The Welsh Green is NOT rare. The book actually refers to the directly as the 'Common Welsh Green' yes the COMMON Welsh Green is actually one of the easiest to find in England/Wales. The other main species found in the area which is a bit more rare are the Hebridean Blacks. |
| Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 11 . 7/7/2016 Loved it ~Stasia |
| lilyflower101 chapter 11 . 5/10/2016 I love this story! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2015 Have just read the whole story and I absolutely love it (I read it a while back as well but I just had to re read it). However, though you punctuation is amazing some of your spelling is a bit off so I am going to be that really annoying reviewer who picks up on it. I'm not doing this to be mean because I love this story to pieces, just getting the full potential out of this story :D Line 9 - "Not to have to teach stupid bloody students would be nice, to have a quite Christmas." - quite should be quiet Line 12 - "Angela Thomas" - Yeah from reading the rest of this fic I wasn't too sure if you had created a new character or you have gotten the name of Angelina Johnson wrong. I've been classing it as an OC but she links up very well with Angelina which had me confused. (even though Angelina left the same year the twins did) Lines 14 to 15 - It would look neater if you carried on writing out the numbers in letters rather than in actual numerical form. Also, you had already started doing it like that so it would make sense to finish it :) Line 17 - Tunni should be Tuney (that's what it's like in the books anyway but I had to research that just then to see how it is spelt. Line 22 - un-capitalise the w in was Line 29 - write out 500 as five hundred Line 31 - Un-capitalise the W in with Line 32 - write 5 as five Line 33 - a full stop at the end of God (Capitalise God) Line 34 - It's should be Its Line 48 - pored should be poured Okay done with chapter 1, I will do chapter 2 tomorrow hopefully at some point (sorry if I'm being annoying) Once again love the story |
| SherCo chapter 11 . 4/27/2015 Such a darling and sweet story. Loved it! |
| SherCo chapter 10 . 4/27/2015 Wow. So many babies and happy couples! Love it! |
| SherCo chapter 9 . 4/27/2015 So much love. :) And Dudley and Luna? I think they'd be great together! Love! |
| SherCo chapter 8 . 4/27/2015 Love the softer side of Snape! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/26/2015 Can't wait to see the plan! Great story so far. |
| SherCo chapter 6 . 4/26/2015 Sirius! And the twist with Draco! Priceless! |
| SherCo chapter 5 . 4/26/2015 Really loved Dudley! And Draco is sweet! Living this! |
| SherCo chapter 4 . 4/26/2015 Knew there was something up with HP and DM! Also love how Lilly is so much fun. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/26/2015 So sweet, the Lupin and Snape scene. And love Snape realizing he and Harry are not so different. |
| SherCo chapter 2 . 4/22/2015 Great to see into Snape's childhood. Love it! keep it coming! |
