Fuck you you shitty mother fucker. You took the first good fic I've seen in years and shat on it right in the start of the second chapter by having Sakura fuck Sasuke the fag right out the gate. That made me drop this harder that your mom dropped you when you were born. Fuck off and burn in hell.

I'm not going to lie, I was really enjoying this until the demon thing. You fucked up a lot of stuff and it was all blown out of proportions. I'm sorry, but I really can't continue to read this. This is horrible. I did like it at the beginning, but it turned into absolute garbage. You didn't use a lot of potential for certain characters in the story and never went into depth about certain things. I was hoping you'd make this into a really nice fix-it but you completely destroyed the general idea of the story and turned it into lowkey smut and random bullshit. This was supposed to be about the chūnin exams. What the hell do demons have to do with that? Your summary was accurate for the first few chapters, then it just turns into absolute nonsense. It makes me think you have no idea where the story is going to go, and I believe that. What the hell happened? It transitioned into utter pandemonium so quickly you have no choice but to hang on during the ride. It wasn't a good transition, either. It was jerky and uncomfortable. There was way too much sex, etc. You really could have done something great with this story. Some people may feel as though I've got to read the other chapters to understand it, and it'll get better. I don't want to waste my time trying to get to a "turning point" in the story. I don't like this, and I hope you can respect my opinion on that.

Maybe I'll check out this fanfic later and see if I want to give it another try, but until then, adios.

Ah. Well, that's interesting. Was this demon arc thing supposed to help with character development? It seems mostly boring.

Oh, okay. That's lewd. Kinda disappointing. You're losing the whole focus of the story here.

Holy shit. This story is amazing! It gets more and more complicated, sometimes I imagine you're just pulling shit out of your ass at this point. You probably are. Lmao, if this story somehow manages to tie itself together by the end of itself I will be pleasantly surprised. Loving this though!

AHH. I LOVE HOW THIS IS GOING. 3

Man, immediately after chapter 1, this story just careened off a cliff of horniness and debauchery and never looked back.

I honestly don't know what to make of this. I mean, it's not bad, per say. It's still, well, interesting. Well written, I guess. I just don't know what I was expecting.

An exceptional story. I'm very impressed, thank you.

I really enjoy this story. Even if every thing is not my cup of tea. I would never have wanted Kami and demons in this story if I had the choice. But you did it so well that I enjoyed it. Other thing is I know a lot of people like the bash sasuke and Sakura train. I can even get a laugh out of it. But it should be going somewhere. Always seems dumb as Naruto gets stronger they completely stagnate in stupidity. Use it as a device to motivate the other two. Let them learn and grow from it though.

Sasuke is wasted in a lot of stories. He is actually quite a good antagonist to use. If built properly. Yes he is a bit of a dick in the beginning. But he got mind fucked when he was 8 and lost his family. The person he loved and idolized the most in the world did those things to him. So the idea that he would be a friendly preteen is kind of silly. If anyone would have the right to be a bit angsty and want separation from what in his perspective are clueless children is not shocking.

You can shape him into anything for a story. Reclusive best friend who is lost in anger. Or friend turned worst enemy. Anything but whiny weak and self entitled. It is just a waste of his skills from manga and anime.

I also get the Sakura hate to. But your story showed that you can do Pretty much anything with her skills. Medic. Genjutsu. Tsunade super power brawler. She has room to do all the subtle arts very well. Just as your story demonstrated. Making her a complete waste fangirl is just not that useful. If you hate her as a writer change teams so she has a reduced role..even then should avoid complete fangirl past chunin exams. Unless it is going to lead to serious growth soon after at least.

Anyways I to much. Thanks for the story.

gonna be honest, didn't see the multiverse/metaphysics you picked coming till it slapped me in the face, good job. also this is awesome, I am dreading when I'm gonna inevitably run out of chapters.

I just finished re-reading this story for the third time. It is by far my favorite fanfic out of the thousands that I've read over the past 8 years or so. Thank you so much for writing it.

this has to be the worst fanfic i have ever had the displeasure to read. beyond the sasuke bashing.

Wow. This was fantastic, and I was really enjoying it. Then the demon became a thing and ruined quite literally everything I liked about it. I tried to push through, see if it got better, and I'm sure it might, but I just can't stomach wading through *absolute garbage* in the vague hope that all that damage would be undone.

This is the most complex and interesting time-travel fic that I've ever read. I've also never read a fic that effortlessly wove romance and badass fight scenes in the way that you did. Every time there was something that I was sure you were just going to gloss over or ignore you turned it into a plot twist or a clever reveal. I honestly can't say enough about this, I stayed up until 3 in the morning last night reading this and then as soon as I woke up this morning finished it. I’m about to go read any other fics you've written.

This fic was wild from start to finish. I enjoyed the ride though!