garbage waste of my time.

Given how implausible I think Voldemort/Harry is, I think you picked a good angle, and I think you wrote it very well.

Ah, Voldy. Creepy.

I think you did this well; personally, I don't understand how anyone could give these two particular characters romantic feelings for one another; but, then again, I've never actullay read one of those fics. This was a good idea and I honestly enjoyed it.

But HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Harry's has WOMANLY eyes. Hehehe. Gigglegiggle.

Now that I've overcome that small bout of immaturity, let me just say it is rather tragic in an awesome way that Voldy's so happy he killed Harry when Harry's just gonna kill him in a few minutes anyway.

So! Wonderfulness! Can't WAIT for the next update!

Squid

I know it's been FOREVER - and I'm truly sorry. BUT I can explain with my tragically unstable computers and homework and a whole bunch of other things I'm sure you don't really care about - still, I'd feel better to have you knowing I don't love this story any less.

NOW. This chapter was beautiful, as always. I think you write a very honest portrayal of Harry, though I've already probably told you that.

Your writing amazes me completely. If I can manage to work to become half as incredible as you, I will thank God. Astounding:)

Great job!

Squid

I love when you update this fic, just so you know. Every chapter's amazing, so when I get the Alert, I'm always happy. I got this a couple days ago, so I knew I had to come read it.

I don't know why you hate this.

It's a really, really difficult pairing, and I've never read this pairing before. I have no clue how people write this without totally butchering characterization. But you didn't.

I like how you didn't go all sweet or romantic, because it wouldn't be believable. I also thought it was cool that it was Voldemort's perspective; I like your characterization of him.

I think it's believable, and that's my highest compliment. I mean, Voldemort doesn't even understand love, but I believe the way he admires Harry in this. I especially loved the line, "No matter how striking he is, he must die."

And the part about Harry's eyes; I adored that.

Oh! And the choice of moment. I thought that was the perfect chance, in canon, for Voldemort to pause and think and almost regret it.

Wow, that was a longer review than I thought it would be. But I really liked this :) and your last review reply was so sweet, by the way :) Anyhow, I will go now. Just know that this was awesome. Really.

Not as brilliant as the other chapters, but as this is, honestly, the ship that launched a thousand nightmares, I think this is the best anyone could do. Seriously, I have to admire your guts in going for this. 3

THE LAST LINE WAS SO CUTE.

Seriously, you have such an amazing way with last lines, it's incredible, and I love it.

Overall, I thought this was adorable, and can't imagine why you don't like it. It's a sweet moment between the two, and I really like the way Ginny needed the time to confess that she loved him, because I think that after almost losing Harry so many times, that really fit with her character.

Anyways, a really sweet and beautiful scene. Thanks for a lovely read!

Ahhh, beautiful. The last line is perfect; flawless.

Overall, it's a very bittersweet chapter. I loved when you slipped into their thoughts, like 'luckier than anyone in the world'. The smallest details, like Remus noticing Lily's lipbiting habit, really showed the connection in the way they payed attention to each other. A really cute but sad look at these two. I liked that you had made them date before, and not get over each other. I've never seen that touch before, but it made it believable. Great chapter!

So, I feel awful for not having reviewed chapters ten and eleven when I first read them, months ago, intending to come back when I had time, to write you a nice review. Well, I guess now is the time!

I love this. Pansy and Draco is a pairing I usually like, if people get Pansy right - not just some snivelling, whining girl. You did it perfectly, showing how Pansy is much more attached to Draco than he is attached to her. The final line was beautiful. I really like the idea of unrequited love between the two, even though they're together. I like Draco's speech too, about having fun. Lovely!

There's nothing wrong with this at all. In fact, I quite liked it. Very good description. I look forward to reading your next chapter. :)

Sweet! Really, this is a very nice portrait of the two of them, and I like the dynamic you've given them.

As much as I dislike this pairing, I can't deny that I found this very cute (:

Well done .

Augh! I missed the update, I can't believe it! I love the mutual un-requitedness here, nice twist. Their stumbling confession were very poignant, and their determiantion to not let on how they truly felt - an for the other person's happiness - that was wonderful. Nice writing!

I will say, I've always liked Snape/Lily Lupin/Lily more than James/Lily. Another great chapter can't wait to read more :)

I think I liked this one the most. It was so in character for Draco and in a way still remained in character for Pansy and it was just really really good