I really like the concept of your story! Light as a shinigami while continuing to be kira is something i never really thought about, but enjoyed immensely. You also have a great writing style which made reading this story even better! Thanks for sharing your work :)

That was strange but hilarious

this was really great... this is a first fanfiction i have read that i really enjoyed and liked that belonged to DEAH NOTE...thank you for sharing..

I really like this twist to canon! Great story!

I really loved this, what can I bribe you with so you'll write more multi chaptered death note fics?

Love the idea for this story. One nitpicky thing though...

In Japanese the word "ne" is used at the end of sentences when asking for agreement.
For example:
It's hot, isn't it?
Would translate to:
It's hot, ne?
Or in complete Japanese:
Atsui desu ne?

Thanks for reading my Japanese sentence structure rant!

This was really good.

Brilliant ending!...and beginning...and middle...And, well, everything!

LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!

Good story

Haha interesting story!

Raito is awesome. The smartest of them all. I wish he did return as a Shinigami though.

I liked this a lot. I only wish that it was slight longer but loved it all the same.

So glad to discover you had ANOTHER Death Note fic, LOVE IT AND LOVE YOU!

Great story, I loved the twist you gave to it.