Wowza, you are a really really good writer. This is awesome, and I do hope you finish :)

Oooo, you should update. This is an awesome story c: And very well written.

The Vonnegut references (one of Emily's favorite writers) were a nice touch, and a good way to ensure op-sec.

"Acts unbecoming to the furtherment of humankind" - how deliciously vague.

Very nice Gideon & Reid chapter.

Nice job showing the differences between necessities and luxuries, depending on your point of view. Even to the not really hungry, since they'd had breakfast that morning. Most folks of that side of the river would consider 1:00 a late lunch and be starving if they hadn't had elevenses.

Interesting beginning, definitely intriguing.

Read all of this in one sitting-very good! You write well and the story is incredibly original while still keeping bits of the characters that we love! Looking forward to more!

This. Is. AWESOME! I really hope you're able to update soon!

wheres the picture from for this fanfic?

These two can do anything together, I'm glad you updated.

Another great update, I can't wait to see what happens next

Hahaha, nice bit of cliffhanger there at the end. Loved all the funny little moments in this chapter too. Glad you updated! :)

Thank you so much for the update! This is one of my favorite stories ever :-D

This story is awesome! Any chance of a continuation?