You should add more stuff to this chapter or do another one

I love this story! It's practically amazing!

i can't wait 4 the nxt chapter! i don't usally like OC fics but this one ROCKS!

awww i love ur story!

definetely my favorite!(:

please update soon, i wanna keep reading! :D

Very Good Story! A good Not-Mary-Sue Character is nice! Also nice to hear 'Kura Has real feelings /

I Love Bakura's Stories. And I'm A Fan Of Bakura!

it was good and I enjoy reading your story even though I don't beleive that yami bakura would ever be with someone like that.

but maybe that's just what fanfiction is all about.

I thought this chapter was great so keep it up!

) I really enjoyed reading this story! It's a shame you might not continue you it!

But, I'll put it on my alert just incase xD!

Good Luck with any future writing!

cool chapter, this chapter didn't suck! lol It's good ;) Can't wait til chapter 9! ;D

how are you to come house torrow at

i really like this story keep it up or i'll send you to the shadow realm muahhahahahahahahahah! yami bakura: she means it keep writing or we'll really send you to the shadow realm *evil laugh*

hahaha its a cute and optimistic story

I like it very much . update soon please )

great story

when is more of this coming out i really want to read more! lol

I was wondering, how does Yumi's eye structure look? Is it round and cute like Yugi-chan's or are they sharp and serious like Yami-kun's?