Reviews for miko mew mew
Foxie3366 chapter 1 . 7/11/2019
Please tell is this story discontinued?
zoey chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
I really like this story are you going to make some more chapters?
Confused chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
No offense but.. what the hell did I just read?
christie chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
neater have i .NYA!
Bloodybattle chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
please up date i want more wait scratch that I NNNNEEEEEEED
Ace chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Too Hard to follow or make much sense of.
Kagome55678 chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
cool and the changing part is like the "straberry metamopho-sis" . . . . well something like that anyways, but its a good story and i think that if you update soon that youll have a lot of reviews! . UPDATE SOON PLZ
wolf sakura chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
omfg i love this

i think il mae a ficwit tis paring
IJustWannaReadEpicStories chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
It is very clear to me that this story is not very seriously written. Not only are there so many gramma and spelling mistakes that it takes away any kinda of want to continue it.

It is lacking any kinda of spirit and passionate hand, and the OCC is just too much. YOu have left out warnings, and a Disclaimer. And the names are as Wrongly spelled and written as it could be.

There's no plot in this story-line, and thus it merely seems like a weak attempt of a joke, than an actual story. And since you have no qualms to continue the story - and it's very clear that it is abbandoned, then you should delete it. IT takes up too much space for something that wont ever be finished.

Either this is a redo, or a delete.
Mika the Dark princess chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
Lov it
The Heart of the Sorrow chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
-.-? No offense, but this is just sad. As in, really REALLY sad.

Could be a little better if it had more of a plot line.

Ja ne
anonimous chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Oh, and another thing I would do:

Have Kish try to convince Kagome that she should join him on his team.

And have Kagome try to convince Kish that he should join her on her team.

Of course that would only be during their private meetings, and suuch.

Ja Ne!
anonimous chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Why don't you have Kagome transfer to Ichigo's school, and have Kish hunt her down to talk to her and they start a secret friendship that blossoms into something more after afew weeks.

That's what I would do.

Ja Ne!
Thorn-chan chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
Is it really that hard to capitalize the character's names?

Is it too hard to reach over to the shift key?

It really pisses me off when people do that.

Emily: Shut it. Maybe it is.

Thorn: Who asked you?

Emily: No one, we just wanted to answer.

Thorn: Who are you, anyway?

Emily: You know..., I'm that random voice in your head. Also known as: Your consience.

Thorn: O.O' ookiieee, then... *passes out from trying to figure out how that is possible*

Emily: SWEET! I get to say it this time. ( p

Emily: Well, Ja ne.
lola9525 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
the transformation thing is "mew mew(insert whatever) metamorpho-se!"
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