| Reviews for From Water to Fire: Steam |
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   lizzy332 chapter 7 . 6/11 For A read Brightest Nighta and Darkest Days𝚒𝚝𝚜 𝚐𝚘𝚘𝚍 𝚜𝚝𝚞𝚏𝚏 𝙵𝚘𝚛 𝙱 𝚒 𝚝𝚑𝚒𝚗𝚔 𝚝𝚑𝚊𝚝 𝚠𝚘𝚞𝚕𝚍 𝚋𝚎 𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚕𝚕𝚢 𝚒𝚗𝚝𝚎𝚛𝚎𝚜𝚝𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚒 𝚠𝚘𝚞𝚕𝚍 𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚍 𝚒𝚝 |
| IamtheoneandonlyJordan chapter 4 . 12/12/2016 It's spelled scent. Sent is the past tense form of send. So the scent Katara used was vanilla |
| Guest chapter 14 . 10/22/2013 I dont want Aang to come back! |
| KJun chapter 21 . 10/6/2013 You've got me interested. Kat |
| KJun chapter 17 . 10/6/2013 I think, being it's Ozai, the healers should get water from a shrine to Agni. He is the Sun spirit and since they're in the Fire Nation, they won't have so far to go. I'm sure the palace has a shrine to Agni on its property since Agni's descendants are the ones who sit on the throne. Kat |
| the Moon our Witness chapter 1 . 7/10/2013 I like it so far, but there are a few thing I'd like to point out. You used some wrong words (won't instead of want, e.g.), also it would take more than a few hours to get to the Fire Nation by ship, more like several days if its quick. also I think even if Ozai wasnt evil, that still wouldnt make Zuko so impolite (even when he was angry with Uncle, he would never use informal language) because he is brought up that way. I hope this helps you improving the story (: |
| TATA123 chapter 13 . 12/26/2012 Well to your question Aang couldn't have known. Roku is a past life of Aang meaning Aang doesn't know everything Ruko knows. That's way they keep learning the elements. Yes the airbenders knew about the war but they were suppose to tell Aang that he was the avatar at the age 16. The war was already here and they told him but Aang ran away. Aang probably doesn't remember much because he was frozen for a hundred years so his memory could be foggy. |
| lindsey chapter 19 . 10/22/2012 i love ur story! if you want to write you own fiction stories, then go to . it is similar to fanfiction, but the stories are originals. |
| elleelle chapter 9 . 7/26/2012 You know when I compare this one to your newer story, 'realize' you can really see how much you've improved as a writer |
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/5/2011 Sorry, but I just can't read it when your grammatical mistakes are so frequent. |
| daantje chapter 1 . 2/24/2011 woow and i thought my spelling sucked xD i think i understand what you mean though |
| greaserforlife chapter 21 . 10/30/2010 Dude ur story was just getting to the good part plz don't stop! |
| thelegendarytrollwagon chapter 19 . 10/15/2010 :'( |
| thelegendarytrollwagon chapter 18 . 10/15/2010 woo hoo katara is preggers :) please update soon! its their wedding day! |
| thelegendarytrollwagon chapter 17 . 10/15/2010 yeah silver eyes would be good :) good chapt! |
